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4/28 c2 krusnik857
kol go to school and doing some zim give a bang/kool.
kol go to school and doing some zim give a bang/kool.
10/18/2012 c1 drax
Hey did you get the name from that canceled comic
Hey did you get the name from that canceled comic
9/22/2012 c6 kandice.grow
I have created a picture to show what zim looks like in his disguise. Contact me if you want to use it.
I have created a picture to show what zim looks like in his disguise. Contact me if you want to use it.
8/15/2012 c9 GhostNAPPA
Whoa man, great chapter... Also, I LOVE that song ″Alien Youth″, when I read that I was like, ″SKILLET!″
So yeah, great!
Whoa man, great chapter... Also, I LOVE that song ″Alien Youth″, when I read that I was like, ″SKILLET!″
So yeah, great!
5/25/2012 c18 
6TeruKurebayashi
How did Dib manage to make Zim's car the way he wanted? How does he even know how to drive it when it's Irken technology on the inside? Urg, Gaz would never wear something like that -_-. She's not a **.
6TeruKurebayashiHow did Dib manage to make Zim's car the way he wanted? How does he even know how to drive it when it's Irken technology on the inside? Urg, Gaz would never wear something like that -_-. She's not a **.
5/25/2012 c14 TeruKurebayashi
*sigh* Alright, rebel Irkens might involve themselves in sexual activities, but they don't have the same biology as humans, meaning they don't have balls and vaginas, and I don't even think they have real asses.
*sigh* Alright, rebel Irkens might involve themselves in sexual activities, but they don't have the same biology as humans, meaning they don't have balls and vaginas, and I don't even think they have real asses.
5/25/2012 c12 TeruKurebayashi
I'm a bit upset at how you have Zim sleep. Irkens don't sleep and it's believed that the PAK supplies them with energy and regulates brain activity, so they never need to.
I'm a bit upset at how you have Zim sleep. Irkens don't sleep and it's believed that the PAK supplies them with energy and regulates brain activity, so they never need to.
5/25/2012 c11 TeruKurebayashi
The typos are really bad in this one. It's grammatically correct to make a new paragraph whenever the speaker changes, and you keep switching between past and present tense.
The typos are really bad in this one. It's grammatically correct to make a new paragraph whenever the speaker changes, and you keep switching between past and present tense.
5/25/2012 c10 TeruKurebayashi
If you want to look professional, don't put author's notes in the story. Save them for before or after like you do with ZOOM. And an Irken's organ is called a squeedily spooch. I'm not sure if a PAK actually does blood flow, but it does a whole lot more than what you put. And Zim is a loyal soldier for the Tallest, so he wouldn't even think about having a place secret from them, especially if he's going to be talking about something they should know about like human emotions (since that is his job).
If you want to look professional, don't put author's notes in the story. Save them for before or after like you do with ZOOM. And an Irken's organ is called a squeedily spooch. I'm not sure if a PAK actually does blood flow, but it does a whole lot more than what you put. And Zim is a loyal soldier for the Tallest, so he wouldn't even think about having a place secret from them, especially if he's going to be talking about something they should know about like human emotions (since that is his job).
5/25/2012 c9 TeruKurebayashi
Eh, no, Gaz wouldn't come over to someone asking to make friends..unless you're taking her out of character, which I suppose is alright because this is a re-write of canon. Hehe, I totally agree with you on her song.
Eh, no, Gaz wouldn't come over to someone asking to make friends..unless you're taking her out of character, which I suppose is alright because this is a re-write of canon. Hehe, I totally agree with you on her song.
5/25/2012 c6 TeruKurebayashi
*sigh* You don't just enroll in college. Maybe - MAYBE - in high school, but college? No. Some you can't even get into unless you're invited. And I don't understand why he had to go to the restroom to sign the papers.
*sigh* You don't just enroll in college. Maybe - MAYBE - in high school, but college? No. Some you can't even get into unless you're invited. And I don't understand why he had to go to the restroom to sign the papers.