for Reflection8/2/2012 c1 Guest
that was great! please make more i want you do PLEASE! /
that was great! please make more i want you do PLEASE! /
4/8/2012 c1 Twilight the Wolf
OMG! THAT WAS **ING HORRIFYINGLY FUN!
OMG! THAT WAS **ING HORRIFYINGLY FUN!
9/15/2011 c1 
20ImJustThatAnimeFan
WAIT! sooo...the guy somehow got into the house killed chao dropped the knife and left? meaning he was killing chao...directly behind her? O.O
20ImJustThatAnimeFanWAIT! sooo...the guy somehow got into the house killed chao dropped the knife and left? meaning he was killing chao...directly behind her? O.O
8/28/2011 c1 sarah
At the end, my eyes widen. 0.0 That cant be over?
At the end, my eyes widen. 0.0 That cant be over?
8/25/2011 c1 6beebistar
very good for your first story :-)
there were a few speling erors but nothing major. i was very confused at the end though. so the killer was alive one moment but then somehow managed to die behind amy's couch? maybe that could be explained a little better?
good plot and i liked the fluffiness at the end :-)
6beebistarvery good for your first story :-)
there were a few speling erors but nothing major. i was very confused at the end though. so the killer was alive one moment but then somehow managed to die behind amy's couch? maybe that could be explained a little better?
good plot and i liked the fluffiness at the end :-)
8/25/2011 c1 Guest
Oohh dear... Creepy! I hope you continue.
Oohh dear... Creepy! I hope you continue.
8/24/2011 c1 antoine dodson
Well...
obviously there is a rapist in the area, he`s lookin` through yo windows, snatching yo people up, so yo need to hide ya kids, hide ya wifes, and hide ya chao's 'cause their rapin everybody out hea,
Well...
obviously there is a rapist in the area, he`s lookin` through yo windows, snatching yo people up, so yo need to hide ya kids, hide ya wifes, and hide ya chao's 'cause their rapin everybody out hea,
8/24/2011 c1 Guest
You did good for a beginner :)
You did good for a beginner :)