for Just Like Heaven11/30/2011 c1 jjandhotch4ever
This was really good. This is the first seaver fic I've read and it made me want to read more even if she is my least favorite character. No offence
This was really good. This is the first seaver fic I've read and it made me want to read more even if she is my least favorite character. No offence
9/1/2011 c1 
67Graveygraves
I think you did a great job with the characters - must admit a struggle with both of these too.
I think you stayed in character well and I could picture their actions and hear them saying what you wrote.
"Because, if only good things happened here, Earth would be just like heaven," JJ responded sadly. - loved this line by the way!
67GraveygravesI think you did a great job with the characters - must admit a struggle with both of these too.
I think you stayed in character well and I could picture their actions and hear them saying what you wrote.
"Because, if only good things happened here, Earth would be just like heaven," JJ responded sadly. - loved this line by the way!
8/27/2011 c1 12karoanton
yayyy! this was the one I was looking forward to the most out of all of the fics for the Silver Screen challenge. great job! i like how there isn't any weird tension between JJ and Seaver :)
12karoantonyayyy! this was the one I was looking forward to the most out of all of the fics for the Silver Screen challenge. great job! i like how there isn't any weird tension between JJ and Seaver :)
8/27/2011 c1 106nebula2
Read these at work last night but Satan didn't want to cooperate on my second break with the wireless connection . . . So, I liked this story a lot. I thought it was a nice tag to the hospital scene. I think you did a great job with JJ - her going to console Nobody . . . um sorry Seaver(damn that was hard to type) was spot on with her character and nicely written. I find JJ hard to write myself but I think you did a good job with her. I don't think I'm qualified to comment on how you did with S&&^% because I don't like the character . . .
I did find one typo - "The Boston Hospital was quiet after nest of Prentiss' death had been broken to the team" - it took me a couple of times to figure it out but I do believe 'nest' should be 'news' . . .
Nice use of the prompt. It went in there very well (okay I may be a bit biased on that point . . . ). Very nice job!
106nebula2Read these at work last night but Satan didn't want to cooperate on my second break with the wireless connection . . . So, I liked this story a lot. I thought it was a nice tag to the hospital scene. I think you did a great job with JJ - her going to console Nobody . . . um sorry Seaver(damn that was hard to type) was spot on with her character and nicely written. I find JJ hard to write myself but I think you did a good job with her. I don't think I'm qualified to comment on how you did with S&&^% because I don't like the character . . .
I did find one typo - "The Boston Hospital was quiet after nest of Prentiss' death had been broken to the team" - it took me a couple of times to figure it out but I do believe 'nest' should be 'news' . . .
Nice use of the prompt. It went in there very well (okay I may be a bit biased on that point . . . ). Very nice job!