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2/11 c1 3KitKat71483
I ship Rossi/Garcia so I love reading about moments of friendship. Thank you so much for sharing this! KK
1/4 c1 53Flames101
Aww so sweet. Loved the combo of grouchy Rossi and cheery Garcia; there were definitely moments where I thought they sounded just like an old married couple. lol.
Great work!
10/8/2011 c1 2Queen Isabella
The story's adorable, but I'm pretty sure that if your top secret mission to steal the rights to Criminal Minds was taking place in the ABC set lot, your mission was doomed to failure to begin with. Criminal Minds is a CBS production. ;)
9/23/2011 c1 607ilovetvalot
Too adorable for words! I am really beginning to love this pairing.

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8/27/2011 c1 13The Gov'nah Meets James Bond
I love this story so much! when I was reading the part where Dave was trying to get Garcia's hand out I was waiting for the part where his hand got caught too! It's a classic moment!
8/27/2011 c1 106nebula2
Lovely use of the prompt! Well done! The song title fit in their seamlessly and sounded like Garcia Dialogue.

Oh, what a duo you picked. Garcia and Rossi are like polar opposites and I think you played them off each other perfectly. Loved how Garcia didn't let Dave dampen her spirits and getting her hand stuck in the lights was priceless. Then Dave getting his shirt caught was a nice bit of irony.

My only criticism was that I think Rossi would have given more of a fuss about the tree being in his house due to the Galen case. He did say in 'Damaged' that he hadn't put up a Christmas tree since that case - because of the axe that Mr. Galen had used to cut down their x-mas tree the x-mas previous. That was quite a long duration of no tree, and yes I did catch your reference to him looking darkly at the tree, but I think it should have been given a bit more attention. Not a big deal. The story is still wonderful and that is just my opinion.

typo - "A charity even at a fancy hotel" - 'even' - 'event'?

" "Hold one," - Hold on?

Loved the commentary on Hotch at the end of the story. I do believe we would see one of those rare Hotch smiles when he walks in on that predicament. Which leads me too - how about a sequel? I want to know who finds them and what the reaction is?
8/26/2011 c1 60Bren Gail
I thought that it was a cute story! I loved how Dave made remarks about her accessories and how Penelope had a retort to anything he said. I loved it.

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