3/2 c75 Zkrichau099
I loved this story it is my most favored fan fiction of all time

2/28 c1 rsfarmer00792
cool!waiting for the other story.I use buy runescape accounts.
And I should say that it is a amazing

9/18/2012 c1 Guest
I like your story... i just dont like you after reading your profile, especially because of how offensive you were to people on the stereotypes section. as an atheist myself, couldnt give a shit about the religious parts, but you know that not all fat people have lame self control, right? some of them have prblems or whatever

but otherwise, nice story. just remember im reading the story because i like the content, not because of you.

9/16/2012 c75 Son of da Bwon
Damnit... You could have at least written to a hundred... such a teasing way to end it...

9/11/2012 c34 Son of da Bwon
I want to give you one more praise, though I haven't been doing the reviews in the way I intended. Todays praise is that I like how you make it feel like we are experiencing real life (with the fragility of the characters and the scourge), yet it still has elements in the game, and I am not talking about the obvious in game quests referenced or NPCs who are character. Romvoy is a classic quest giver without it being over in his behavior as a quest giver. The characters give themselves their missions and yet as classic quest giver he doesn't bog down the story with his over bloted presence... Though in the past you have had NPCs from in game participate in the battle, for example you have Vachon, Perrine, and ... name who I can't remember... you had the forces in Scarlet Monastery but it still felt like everything rested with your characters and it still does (though in the case of the Scarlet Monastery IT really did all fall on them). I appreciate, your writing and I look forward to the next chapters (and eventually the next story)

9/10/2012 c13 Son of da Bwon
Oops I seem to have over shot from my original plan to Review 1-12.
Anywyas, I thought I would share with you my thoughts... I know you have already completed this storyline... (I noticed it goes to 75 impressive chapters), however I still feel that you should be praised for this incredibly well written work... So I am going to mention my opinion chapters 1-13.

First off let me say; wow! What an incredible cast of OCs, the way you effortlessly describe in detail their experiences with the hierarchy of Scarlet Monastery, is just simply astounding. Danoshar is fascinating main protagonist, he starts off as a simple farmer and we really get to feel his journey from their to Scarlet Soldier, though with his work at Garen's Haunt I doubt he will be a soldier much longer. Though I have always hated The Scarlet Crusade and all it stood for, you still prove effective in your abilities to make them likable. Capt. Vachon generally he was a fun one to kill, that being said... its going to be really hard to play through that... I am going to be sad at his death because of this story. I really don't find much lacking, even though the portion that addressed his training; The three part Training Days part wasn't terribly exciting we still got to watch how he grew and I continued to be amused by it.

Reviewing the first 1-13 chapters is difficult as you managed to put a lot more information then most writers would with twenty. I have really nothing that I could critique you on, there is almost no grammatical or spelling errors, there wasn't any discerable mistakes that I could point out. Though I would like to mention a character assessement. As my favorite character I am sure Jonas is going to die (After all I am cursed, from disney to scary movies with lots of gore my favorite character ALWAYS dies), I still feel that he is worth mentioning. He is an incredibly likable character, he almost comes off as a comic relief, well so does Balean... however he offers more to the rise of Danoshar, and I really appreciate his character and I appreciate how you have managed to utilize him. As often times Paladins over shadow Warriors... you have managed to keep from doing that... to which i thank you.

Oh and as I move on, I am looking forward to Lethalia getting some of that stick dislodged from her ass... quite looking forward to it.

9/10/2012 c1 Son of da Bwon
Its an honor to be the 85th reviewer of this... I just wanted to let you know I plan (after reading the first chapter only) to review on this as I read it... obviously I am not going to write a review for every chapter, but I do want to write a few for the ones I really like or really don't like. This one, this one is a really good chapter. I like two things in particular about it, one I like your writing style. There is a perfect blend of Dialogue V.S. Details, I always find with a lot of really polpular writing today, there is way to much description of other things like the chairs or the table... sometimes its a nice affect but more often then not for me, it is just to much, it distracts on what is going on with the characters. You add what you need to add and then you move on, I like that... a lot.

The second thing I like about this first chapter, what is going to keep me coming back, is that (and I don't know if Danthor is a character you made in-game... or what) you treat your main character like an actual person in WoW. A lot of the stories I have been reading, the characters are really OP... like I am sure if you pulled a random story out of the bag and told the author to write this story... the holy light "purifier"... would have been treated like; "Well it stung like the dickens, but Danthor is a tough S.o.B... he can handle anything". You didn't do that, you told us it was going to hurt, AND you showed Danthor terrified (something else no one would have done). All in all to me that shows maturity, and I always like it when an Author is willing to sacrifice the characters "cool factor" to make him more realistic. BTW I think that when a character feels fear and feels pain and this is all registered for the reader, it makes them much more likable and cool then someone who is like "psh... that just tickles".