for A Hero's Journey: The Scarlet Story8/9/2012 c66 Anthony
I liked how danthor became more im touch with the light.
I liked how danthor became more im touch with the light.
8/7/2012 c65 Anthony
Nice chapter. What i liked about this chapter is how Danthor sees the power of the Light and i think he is going to start believing again.
Nice chapter. What i liked about this chapter is how Danthor sees the power of the Light and i think he is going to start believing again.
8/4/2012 c65 
2FractiousDay
Could you write something original? The story's good, but for the last few chapters there hasn't particularly been any character development or new things its just "And then Danthor did some Icecrown quests". Also can there be another love interest? Danthor seems to be a practical fellow and seems to have gotten over Lethella by now
2FractiousDayCould you write something original? The story's good, but for the last few chapters there hasn't particularly been any character development or new things its just "And then Danthor did some Icecrown quests". Also can there be another love interest? Danthor seems to be a practical fellow and seems to have gotten over Lethella by now
8/4/2012 c65 WolfPaladin
Impressive!
However, Dalfors isn't normally that gruff...at least, he didn't seem too gruff when I went questing.
Assuming that Danthor didn't break his sternum, I'd say he'll live to fight another day. If he did break it, well...let's just say he needs better Plate, as the next blow there would be the end of him.
However, it seems strange that no one comments on the Scourge banner much. Especially it's twisted parody of the old Lordaeron crest.
Impressive!
However, Dalfors isn't normally that gruff...at least, he didn't seem too gruff when I went questing.
Assuming that Danthor didn't break his sternum, I'd say he'll live to fight another day. If he did break it, well...let's just say he needs better Plate, as the next blow there would be the end of him.
However, it seems strange that no one comments on the Scourge banner much. Especially it's twisted parody of the old Lordaeron crest.
7/31/2012 c63 11WolfPaladin
Alright...
I've been reading this one since it's first chapter. Suffice to say, I'm damn impressed. Not one plot point, not one cock-up, not a single interrupt in the flow. All in all, one hell of a tale. Kudos!
Danthor for the most part is one of the most balanced characters I've seen in a fic. Not too much of any personality trait, making him probably the best representation of the average joe trying to survive Azeroth's merciless treatment.
The bit with the Mage Lethella was pretty sad, but oddly fitting. The last man standing image suits this Crusader quite appropriately. However, his lack of survivor's guilt is...unusual, to say the least.
All in all, this one remains one of the most prominent fics in my memory. Keep it up!
(On a side note - Darion seems to have forgotten to mention he killed his own brother in the Scarlet Monastery with the Corrupted Ashbringer.)
(Also, Arthas is slightly OOC. He's not the cocky type, all things considered - he's more of the cold, brutal warlord kind of person, with a permanently grim expression. Seeing him come all the way just to spite Highlord Mograine seems strange.)
(Also, I'd suggest raising the Mage Lethella - or any of his former comrades - into undeath. Preferably, among the Ebon Blade as new recruits. It opens interesting possibilities.)
11WolfPaladinAlright...
I've been reading this one since it's first chapter. Suffice to say, I'm damn impressed. Not one plot point, not one cock-up, not a single interrupt in the flow. All in all, one hell of a tale. Kudos!
Danthor for the most part is one of the most balanced characters I've seen in a fic. Not too much of any personality trait, making him probably the best representation of the average joe trying to survive Azeroth's merciless treatment.
The bit with the Mage Lethella was pretty sad, but oddly fitting. The last man standing image suits this Crusader quite appropriately. However, his lack of survivor's guilt is...unusual, to say the least.
All in all, this one remains one of the most prominent fics in my memory. Keep it up!
(On a side note - Darion seems to have forgotten to mention he killed his own brother in the Scarlet Monastery with the Corrupted Ashbringer.)
(Also, Arthas is slightly OOC. He's not the cocky type, all things considered - he's more of the cold, brutal warlord kind of person, with a permanently grim expression. Seeing him come all the way just to spite Highlord Mograine seems strange.)
(Also, I'd suggest raising the Mage Lethella - or any of his former comrades - into undeath. Preferably, among the Ebon Blade as new recruits. It opens interesting possibilities.)
7/29/2012 c63 Guest
"Fuck you all"...LOL.
"Fuck you all"...LOL.
7/28/2012 c63 6Sarge51
Another awesome chapter, I hope the next is just as good. I hope Danthor is okay
6Sarge51Another awesome chapter, I hope the next is just as good. I hope Danthor is okay
7/26/2012 c14 Anthony
I really liked this chapter because it has a lot of action,drama and a thinl a romance is brewing between Danthor and Lethella
I really liked this chapter because it has a lot of action,drama and a thinl a romance is brewing between Danthor and Lethella
7/25/2012 c62 Guest
This is amazing. I love your writing style and your lack of fear to kill off main characters lol. Keep it up man. Btw danthora badass death knight. Make him one!
This is amazing. I love your writing style and your lack of fear to kill off main characters lol. Keep it up man. Btw danthora badass death knight. Make him one!
7/22/2012 c61 Sarge51
Another great chapter in the story of Danthor. It's good to see that he's finally starting to be on the side of the light, for now. I wonder what will be in your next update? Keep the the good work!
Another great chapter in the story of Danthor. It's good to see that he's finally starting to be on the side of the light, for now. I wonder what will be in your next update? Keep the the good work!
7/18/2012 c1 1Leinad Rengaw
This is a gripping story! Referring to the story as a whole and not just this first chapter, How did you manage to write so much in less than a year?
1Leinad RengawThis is a gripping story! Referring to the story as a whole and not just this first chapter, How did you manage to write so much in less than a year?
7/16/2012 c59 6Sarge51
This, is epic. I hope you continue. I've been reading this story since you put it up. It's the most awesome thing I've read lately, please update soon. Also, I wonder if Danthor will have any connection to the light?
6Sarge51This, is epic. I hope you continue. I've been reading this story since you put it up. It's the most awesome thing I've read lately, please update soon. Also, I wonder if Danthor will have any connection to the light?
6/24/2012 c56 2FractiousDay
great story so far :) really enjoying it, sad about Lethella's death, mabey she can be raised as some kind of undead :) oh well, anyway, keep up the good work!
2FractiousDaygreat story so far :) really enjoying it, sad about Lethella's death, mabey she can be raised as some kind of undead :) oh well, anyway, keep up the good work!