for The Truth Behind The Secrets6/10/2012 c31 Huntress
Ok basically ur story waz amazingly fantastic I mean it
It had action romance teen stuff so it's not 2 smoshy
I loved every sentence and chapter
Good job
U succeeded !
Ok basically ur story waz amazingly fantastic I mean it
It had action romance teen stuff so it's not 2 smoshy
I loved every sentence and chapter
Good job
U succeeded !
6/8/2012 c31 Alex
I don't know if you will get this but I really enjoyed this story, although I felt it was cut a little short! Anyway I thought Luna was awesome and would love to hear more, maybe you could do that sequel? :D
I don't know if you will get this but I really enjoyed this story, although I felt it was cut a little short! Anyway I thought Luna was awesome and would love to hear more, maybe you could do that sequel? :D
9/18/2011 c31 
2PhantasmicDragon
Finally managed to catch up (sort of)!
Amazing story overall!
Watch out for a couple typos near the end (last couple chapters) but they're not major and you can still figure out what you meant :)
Happy Writing!
2PhantasmicDragonFinally managed to catch up (sort of)!
Amazing story overall!
Watch out for a couple typos near the end (last couple chapters) but they're not major and you can still figure out what you meant :)
Happy Writing!
9/18/2011 c30 PhantasmicDragon
You're doing great! The chapters are kinda short, but that's okay. You do really seem to love your fight scenes, and you're pretty darn good at writing them!
Keep it up!
Happy Writing!
You're doing great! The chapters are kinda short, but that's okay. You do really seem to love your fight scenes, and you're pretty darn good at writing them!
Keep it up!
Happy Writing!
9/18/2011 c29 PhantasmicDragon
Maybe she's met Drake? I was gonna guess Keller but then I remembered she met her before!
Guess I've gotta read and find out...
Awesome job though!
Happy Writing!
Maybe she's met Drake? I was gonna guess Keller but then I remembered she met her before!
Guess I've gotta read and find out...
Awesome job though!
Happy Writing!
9/18/2011 c28 PhantasmicDragon
Haha gotta love that legal system :)
As always, spectacular writing!
Happy writing!
Haha gotta love that legal system :)
As always, spectacular writing!
Happy writing!
9/18/2011 c27 PhantasmicDragon
Well depending on how trustworthy Alyssa is, this may or may not be a good thing... I'm still not completely sure though
Great chapter! Can't wait to read more!
Happy Writing!
Well depending on how trustworthy Alyssa is, this may or may not be a good thing... I'm still not completely sure though
Great chapter! Can't wait to read more!
Happy Writing!
9/18/2011 c26 PhantasmicDragon
:'( Poor Luna!
Maybe her mother is part of the Night World! That's my theory... Lost witch maybe?
That'd be really cool and would make sense...
Amazing chapter though!
Happy Writing!
:'( Poor Luna!
Maybe her mother is part of the Night World! That's my theory... Lost witch maybe?
That'd be really cool and would make sense...
Amazing chapter though!
Happy Writing!
9/18/2011 c25 PhantasmicDragon
Worst news a kid can get!
I have a feeling Luna won't be wanting to go back home now!
Awesome chapter!
Happy writing!
Worst news a kid can get!
I have a feeling Luna won't be wanting to go back home now!
Awesome chapter!
Happy writing!
9/16/2011 c30 2Jennison Silverye
Yay! For the return of fight scenes and cliffies:D
And hahaXD About Alyssa mentioning in the previous chapter that Lucas was almost just as cute as Drake:P So at least now we have one mystery e-mail case solved:P And it looks like Lucas is trying to get into Alyssa's good books:P Wonder why(:
And looks like the Frost family knows about the supernatural now. With those werewolves breaking and entering, it's either they're all going to have their memory erased, or they're gonna have to live in Las Vegas as well. That'll be interesting(: And you're right about this story being long. But it doesn't seem too long considering how fast you update(: Still, congrats on that:D
I guess I'll pm you about how you're doing with this story then(: (I believe that's what you meant?)
Looking forward to the next chapter(:
2Jennison SilveryeYay! For the return of fight scenes and cliffies:D
And hahaXD About Alyssa mentioning in the previous chapter that Lucas was almost just as cute as Drake:P So at least now we have one mystery e-mail case solved:P And it looks like Lucas is trying to get into Alyssa's good books:P Wonder why(:
And looks like the Frost family knows about the supernatural now. With those werewolves breaking and entering, it's either they're all going to have their memory erased, or they're gonna have to live in Las Vegas as well. That'll be interesting(: And you're right about this story being long. But it doesn't seem too long considering how fast you update(: Still, congrats on that:D
I guess I'll pm you about how you're doing with this story then(: (I believe that's what you meant?)
Looking forward to the next chapter(:
9/14/2011 c24 2PhantasmicDragon
Uh-oh. Things always go wrong it would seem... At least in your story-worlds anyways :p
Very good chapter(s) though. Your writing style is awesome, and there are very few mistakes. Those that are there are very small. :)
Can't wait to find out what's going to happen now that Luna's family is thrown into the mix!
Happy Writing!
2PhantasmicDragonUh-oh. Things always go wrong it would seem... At least in your story-worlds anyways :p
Very good chapter(s) though. Your writing style is awesome, and there are very few mistakes. Those that are there are very small. :)
Can't wait to find out what's going to happen now that Luna's family is thrown into the mix!
Happy Writing!
9/14/2011 c22 PhantasmicDragon
Dun dun duuuun
If Luna's mom heard her and Alyssa on the phone, they are both so dead!
Now I'm still not sure if I like this Drake character or not... Not really trusting the dragon-side of him. I like Lucas better :)
Sorry, but it's the truth.
Spectacular job though!
Can't wait to read more!
Happy Writing!
Dun dun duuuun
If Luna's mom heard her and Alyssa on the phone, they are both so dead!
Now I'm still not sure if I like this Drake character or not... Not really trusting the dragon-side of him. I like Lucas better :)
Sorry, but it's the truth.
Spectacular job though!
Can't wait to read more!
Happy Writing!
9/14/2011 c20 PhantasmicDragon
Very good! Poor Luna! Her family misses her so much and now she's probably missing them too!
Keep it up!
Happy Writing!
Very good! Poor Luna! Her family misses her so much and now she's probably missing them too!
Keep it up!
Happy Writing!
9/14/2011 c18 PhantasmicDragon
Yay! A dragon! :) I like dragons... Kinda... Depends on the kind.
The fact that Luna kissed a dragon... Hmmm dunno how I feel about that...
Awesome chapter though and I'm sorry I'm behind on reading!
Happy Writing!
Yay! A dragon! :) I like dragons... Kinda... Depends on the kind.
The fact that Luna kissed a dragon... Hmmm dunno how I feel about that...
Awesome chapter though and I'm sorry I'm behind on reading!
Happy Writing!