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5/4 c1 66the ticking clock
this was so amazing and breath taking and beautiful. What a wonderful way to portray their relationship...love it!
4/18 c1 3thethreebroomsticks69
I actually really like this. A lot of Post-DH stories just get Harry and everyone else completely back to normal in about two paragraphs and it's weird because they just went through a WAR, of course there are going to be repercussions!

So, I think, this story ... was very real. :)
11/27/2012 c1 Serendox
Really good drabble-a little dark for JK, but this is fanfiction, and you've made it more realistic. Love it!
11/11/2012 c1 2metamorphmoses
That was beautiful, and I really wish there was a "crying happy tears" emoticons
5/17/2012 c1 13baobabs
honestly? this is so heartbreaking and real and painful and /true/. it's so sad that after everything they've done, the world they've saved, they still can't really be happy because they're heroes and heroes can't be heroes without suffering. they're sort of so broken, you know? and tbh, it's very true and very real and the way you've written them, with the being drunk thing and the nightmares and how harry counts to twenty-six and all that- the laughing and the falling against the wall and /this is their release/- you are such a good writer, no, that's wrong, you are such an AMAZING writer, soulful, heartbreaking, you have so much skill, i bow down to you. :D
3/25/2012 c1 40alohamora080
"It's not all right, but it doesn't need to be." I've never read a truer thing, regarding these two. Because, at the end of the day, they went through too much together for it to ever be all right again. I love how you showed clearly how it doesn't need to be all right for them to be happy, though. :')
2/21/2012 c1 9psychedout9
wow, really beautifully written :)
10/7/2011 c1 8jennimiley
absolutely beautiful! Such sweet heartbreaking emotion, because it is a nightmare and it's not alright...ah! great job
8/29/2011 c1 3The Optimistic Dreamer
Very well done.
8/29/2011 c1 Belzjude
Painfully beautiful and completely on par. Thank you for such a beautiful insight.
8/28/2011 c1 69Unsuspected
This captures so perfectly how I imagined things would be after the war. You did a really excellent job with this. It was really beautifully written.
8/28/2011 c1 5Romance and Musicals
This was so sad. It broke my heart. But, I'm glad that Harry and Ginny can comfort each other. I just wish they didn't have to. But, you're right. They'll always be war veterans and that will always screw them up.
8/28/2011 c1 53Naty L. Potter
Hey! Do you remember me? =)

I just got an e-mail from FF saying you had posted an Hinny fanfic and here I am!

I loved, first of all, the way you used future tense to write this fic. it got so different from the usuall, and so awesome to read!

I think you did a great job talking about their fears and problems, and how they manage to help each other with it.

And the last part got amazing!

Congrats, I loved the fic!
8/28/2011 c1 hrgirl
I really liked that and how well it is written. I liked how you made it so real, and let the rough times be rough. Just lovely!
8/28/2011 c1 DecepticonDefenestrater
good story
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