for Significant Glances10/7/2011 c1 
16ellabellbee
I'm not really a fan of Parker/Eliot, but I really enjoyed this story. I think you also had Parker's voice spot on. Good job.
16ellabellbeeI'm not really a fan of Parker/Eliot, but I really enjoyed this story. I think you also had Parker's voice spot on. Good job.
9/1/2011 c1 11krystal214
I loved the closing line for this one. I am really glad I saw this on The Twin Souls Job story. I feel all giddy having read this because I truly love banter done well and their back and forth was awesome.
11krystal214I loved the closing line for this one. I am really glad I saw this on The Twin Souls Job story. I feel all giddy having read this because I truly love banter done well and their back and forth was awesome.
8/30/2011 c1 8shabbytiger
Okay, yay for plot bunnies!
I always thought that first ep was begging for some fic, and here it is! This was In Character and totally believable. Love the pro banter lol.
Loved it. I also agree that this would be wicked as a multi chapter once they re team up and have to deal with that!
Beautifully done as always, so happy to have E/P goodness to read!
(Have a bag of carrots for those plot bunnies ;))
xx Em
8shabbytigerOkay, yay for plot bunnies!
I always thought that first ep was begging for some fic, and here it is! This was In Character and totally believable. Love the pro banter lol.
Loved it. I also agree that this would be wicked as a multi chapter once they re team up and have to deal with that!
Beautifully done as always, so happy to have E/P goodness to read!
(Have a bag of carrots for those plot bunnies ;))
xx Em
8/29/2011 c1 7Mad Hatter Helsing
really good wish it was longer it would lead to a great story which im sure would get alot of reviews.
7Mad Hatter Helsingreally good wish it was longer it would lead to a great story which im sure would get alot of reviews.
8/29/2011 c1 9Alece
I love this notion! I'd like to see you carry on with this idea. Especially Eliot's reaction to the gun Parker brings with her to the warehouse :)
9AleceI love this notion! I'd like to see you carry on with this idea. Especially Eliot's reaction to the gun Parker brings with her to the warehouse :)
8/29/2011 c1 24MacyBearLovesJONAS
Oooh... New Story! Wasn't expecting anything new from you till you finished Twin Souls, so it was an awesome surprise to find it on the listing. :)
A-mazing. That's all I've got to say. Beautiful writing, perfect characterization and best of all, it was open ended so if you ever change your mind, you could write more chapters, which, to people (fans) like me are manna from heaven. :)
Come on, don't you think that 'complete' tag is sittin' there a little too early?
24MacyBearLovesJONASOooh... New Story! Wasn't expecting anything new from you till you finished Twin Souls, so it was an awesome surprise to find it on the listing. :)
A-mazing. That's all I've got to say. Beautiful writing, perfect characterization and best of all, it was open ended so if you ever change your mind, you could write more chapters, which, to people (fans) like me are manna from heaven. :)
Come on, don't you think that 'complete' tag is sittin' there a little too early?
8/29/2011 c1 k8a
Sweetie, I loved this story. In fact I want to see more of it. I'd like a "missing scene" and more about what happens when they get back together for the next job. I think it would be great.
But make sure you finish Consequences and the Twin Souls Job first :-).
Also, you might want to look up Rock of Gibralter - that's a hell of a lot of limestone for Parker to lift!
Looking forward to more of all of them!
Sweetie, I loved this story. In fact I want to see more of it. I'd like a "missing scene" and more about what happens when they get back together for the next job. I think it would be great.
But make sure you finish Consequences and the Twin Souls Job first :-).
Also, you might want to look up Rock of Gibralter - that's a hell of a lot of limestone for Parker to lift!
Looking forward to more of all of them!
8/29/2011 c1 Emowyen
lol, loved this idea. You kept them in character too. Parker has such a funny way about her. Such a great character. I would actually love it if you expanded on this idea and wrote about what happens when it turns out not to be a one time job/thing...hehe.
lol, loved this idea. You kept them in character too. Parker has such a funny way about her. Such a great character. I would actually love it if you expanded on this idea and wrote about what happens when it turns out not to be a one time job/thing...hehe.
8/29/2011 c1 bprice
There's no way this should stay a one-shot! There should definitely be more to come!
There's no way this should stay a one-shot! There should definitely be more to come!
8/29/2011 c1 127messersmontana
Love it, and you do know you could turn this into a multi chapter story too. :O)
127messersmontanaLove it, and you do know you could turn this into a multi chapter story too. :O)