for Reaching Norvys3/15 c9 Genesis Chi
This was absolutely beautiful! Terrifically well-written, a brilliant plot, and adorable romantic scenes between Faro and Sapphire.
A* - Be proud
This was absolutely beautiful! Terrifically well-written, a brilliant plot, and adorable romantic scenes between Faro and Sapphire.
A* - Be proud
1/14 c9 
10whoshallJudgeAngels
Weelll... let's see. I had mixed feelings about this chappie... for one thing it was slightly off-charachter (and I'm not talking about Patrick either), but altogether well-written. I liked the little tad of Conbow [fangirling madly] XD and most other things. I'll give you an A-minus. :) Good luck!
10whoshallJudgeAngelsWeelll... let's see. I had mixed feelings about this chappie... for one thing it was slightly off-charachter (and I'm not talking about Patrick either), but altogether well-written. I liked the little tad of Conbow [fangirling madly] XD and most other things. I'll give you an A-minus. :) Good luck!
1/3 c9 31SapphireOceans
Christmas with Faro! Now, that's how I'd like to spend my Christmas day ;) But I digress. A lovely ending to a lovely, well written and exciting story :D I loved the closing paragraph, it give me the warm fuzzies and just makes me so ridiculously happy that Moryow and Norvys are at peace and the war within Sapphy is over! I look forwards to the epilogue! Happy New Year to you too and good luck with your report card! And I am very glad that you not only started this fic, but you bought it to a stunning conclusion. :D You're an amazing writer and I look forwards to seeing more of your work in future :D
Sapphy
xxx
31SapphireOceansChristmas with Faro! Now, that's how I'd like to spend my Christmas day ;) But I digress. A lovely ending to a lovely, well written and exciting story :D I loved the closing paragraph, it give me the warm fuzzies and just makes me so ridiculously happy that Moryow and Norvys are at peace and the war within Sapphy is over! I look forwards to the epilogue! Happy New Year to you too and good luck with your report card! And I am very glad that you not only started this fic, but you bought it to a stunning conclusion. :D You're an amazing writer and I look forwards to seeing more of your work in future :D
Sapphy
xxx
8/25/2012 c8 SapphireOceans
I was going to review each chapter, but it was so good I just had to read it all the way through.
I believe I have already expressed my love for your writing and I shall now proceed to do so once more. Profusely.
ILOVETHISTORYSOMUCHANDITISTR UELYFANGIRLINGWORTHANDIDEMAN DTHATYOUWRITEMOREINSTANTLYTO PANDERTOMYLOVE.
Ahem.
You have a beautiful, flowing style, and your grip of characterisation is excellent (and far superior to my own, I might add…hyper Rainbow should just stay in the cupboard in my brain where she belongs!) I also loved the reintroduction of minor characters such as Josie and Katie and the way you characterised them, and just the whole plot line in general. The story arc was very well executed, and I can’t wait for the final chapter and epilogue; Faro at Christmas will be fun XD I actually felt like this was an official continuation of Ingo (despite the fact it is based off of an AU scenario XD). Also, I totally agree with Rainbow inheriting the granny Carne type position; it was something I’d thought about before actually, especially as I was thinking that something was going to happen to Granny Carne when I was reading TCOI to restore the balance with the injured Saldowr. So yes, lovely resolution there! Also, you’re right; Roger here is much more sympathetic…my God I’m so horrible in my characterisation of him in my fic XD! Poor Roger!
Oh yes, and I laughed my head off when you said that a chapter that was about 4000 words long was short, because for me that would be amazing XD! I am amazed at how your chapters can be so long! XD When I was editing High Tides, I found that I had a chapter around 500 words long! XD
Anyway, overall, I really loved this and I cannot wait for the conclusion! I only which I had read it earlier!
Sapphire
xxx
I was going to review each chapter, but it was so good I just had to read it all the way through.
I believe I have already expressed my love for your writing and I shall now proceed to do so once more. Profusely.
ILOVETHISTORYSOMUCHANDITISTR UELYFANGIRLINGWORTHANDIDEMAN DTHATYOUWRITEMOREINSTANTLYTO PANDERTOMYLOVE.
Ahem.
You have a beautiful, flowing style, and your grip of characterisation is excellent (and far superior to my own, I might add…hyper Rainbow should just stay in the cupboard in my brain where she belongs!) I also loved the reintroduction of minor characters such as Josie and Katie and the way you characterised them, and just the whole plot line in general. The story arc was very well executed, and I can’t wait for the final chapter and epilogue; Faro at Christmas will be fun XD I actually felt like this was an official continuation of Ingo (despite the fact it is based off of an AU scenario XD). Also, I totally agree with Rainbow inheriting the granny Carne type position; it was something I’d thought about before actually, especially as I was thinking that something was going to happen to Granny Carne when I was reading TCOI to restore the balance with the injured Saldowr. So yes, lovely resolution there! Also, you’re right; Roger here is much more sympathetic…my God I’m so horrible in my characterisation of him in my fic XD! Poor Roger!
Oh yes, and I laughed my head off when you said that a chapter that was about 4000 words long was short, because for me that would be amazing XD! I am amazed at how your chapters can be so long! XD When I was editing High Tides, I found that I had a chapter around 500 words long! XD
Anyway, overall, I really loved this and I cannot wait for the conclusion! I only which I had read it earlier!
Sapphire
xxx
8/8/2012 c7 10whoshallJudgeAngels
YES! This was really, really good. Is there going to be another few chapters?
by the way, happy birthday!
10whoshallJudgeAngelsYES! This was really, really good. Is there going to be another few chapters?
by the way, happy birthday!
8/4/2012 c7 Guest
Happy Birthday:-)!
Happy Birthday:-)!
8/3/2012 c7 5annabethsapphireGaleniss 5ever
HAPPY BIRTHDAY! This was another amazing chapter and I loved the cliffhanger! Thanks for updating fast as well :D Loved it!
5annabethsapphireGaleniss 5everHAPPY BIRTHDAY! This was another amazing chapter and I loved the cliffhanger! Thanks for updating fast as well :D Loved it!
7/30/2012 c6 1AslanPrincess
Keep going, it's great! You should have Saldowr help with Faro's healing. Please write more!
1AslanPrincessKeep going, it's great! You should have Saldowr help with Faro's healing. Please write more!
7/24/2012 c6 Guest
I really love this story, and I love Ingo too! Please update as soon as possible! :)
I really love this story, and I love Ingo too! Please update as soon as possible! :)
7/21/2012 c6 yo mama
the story's gonna end soon? im really curious to see what happens with the weather being warm idea. it's jut been at the back of my head while reading this story
the story's gonna end soon? im really curious to see what happens with the weather being warm idea. it's jut been at the back of my head while reading this story
7/19/2012 c6 10whoshallJudgeAngels
Yes. Granny Carne is right. Tell Faro to take better care of himself... [pouts before grinning]
AWESOME! It wasn't really what I expected to happen, which is good, and I LOVE the cliff-hanger at the end.
On the other hand... you seriously need to include some Faro awesomeness once he recovers cause Sapphy is seriously taking all the action XD. Yes, I love him more... :D
Keep it up!
10whoshallJudgeAngelsYes. Granny Carne is right. Tell Faro to take better care of himself... [pouts before grinning]
AWESOME! It wasn't really what I expected to happen, which is good, and I LOVE the cliff-hanger at the end.
On the other hand... you seriously need to include some Faro awesomeness once he recovers cause Sapphy is seriously taking all the action XD. Yes, I love him more... :D
Keep it up!
7/15/2012 c5 Yo mama
Ahhhh this story is so interesting. It compares to a real book - something I can't say about a lot of fanfics
Ahhhh this story is so interesting. It compares to a real book - something I can't say about a lot of fanfics
7/15/2012 c4 Yo mama
Idk what to say, this story is just really real and believable. I actually got extremely frustrated and angry reading about how her mum wouldn't let her go
Idk what to say, this story is just really real and believable. I actually got extremely frustrated and angry reading about how her mum wouldn't let her go