for Beyond Here Lies Nothing5/30 c6 safranbrod
I'd have to admire Ayden for instantly knowing something's fishy about that girl. Heck, with all those nightly visits, I was thinking he'd frequent the whore house a lot. So remembering a whore girl was quite a surprise for me. But then again, if Ily did cry that night, I'd remember her too. /snort
I'd have to admire Ayden for instantly knowing something's fishy about that girl. Heck, with all those nightly visits, I was thinking he'd frequent the whore house a lot. So remembering a whore girl was quite a surprise for me. But then again, if Ily did cry that night, I'd remember her too. /snort
5/7 c10 
1o.sexynikloveoftherings.o
Just came across your story, I love it! :D it's usually hard for people to write OCs properly because they don't integrate them well into the canon world but I think you've done a great job here. Please update soon! :)
1o.sexynikloveoftherings.oJust came across your story, I love it! :D it's usually hard for people to write OCs properly because they don't integrate them well into the canon world but I think you've done a great job here. Please update soon! :)
4/27 c10 Guest
I wish you would continue the story, I love it!
I wish you would continue the story, I love it!
4/22 c10 sweet97lollipop
I really like your story but when are you going to write more chapters?! It's driving me crazy!
I really like your story but when are you going to write more chapters?! It's driving me crazy!
4/17 c2 Laura137
I have found my perfect story I've been thinking about a story of Jon Snow and a girl from some sort of bad background to fall in love with and then I found your story :O this is so good thank you so much it's so awesomely written and such a good sorry :)
I have found my perfect story I've been thinking about a story of Jon Snow and a girl from some sort of bad background to fall in love with and then I found your story :O this is so good thank you so much it's so awesomely written and such a good sorry :)
3/26 c10 2RubyVS.Emerald
This story was by far the best fanfic of GOT I've read.
I was waiting for someone to write something like that and you nailed it.
and since I see it is so important to you I'm gonna say what I think all of the other readers will agree on: No OOC characters were made in this story! Well done!
And I love the idea of a Theon/OC story!
If you would write such a thing I would be the first to read and review. You have my word!
Please update soon...
2RubyVS.EmeraldThis story was by far the best fanfic of GOT I've read.
I was waiting for someone to write something like that and you nailed it.
and since I see it is so important to you I'm gonna say what I think all of the other readers will agree on: No OOC characters were made in this story! Well done!
And I love the idea of a Theon/OC story!
If you would write such a thing I would be the first to read and review. You have my word!
Please update soon...
2/9 c10 anon
asdfghjkl please continue this story, i am just in awe of you. this is one of the best ideas i have ever seen written and i will probably die if it doesnt get finished.
asdfghjkl please continue this story, i am just in awe of you. this is one of the best ideas i have ever seen written and i will probably die if it doesnt get finished.
11/28/2012 c10 Filany
Okay I really can't wait for this story to continue! I love Jon and I think your Iliya is a great character too! You're style of writing then perfectly fits into the whole novel of GOT. I can't wait to read how it goes on with Ily and Jon! I kind of want them to be a couple (;
I absolutly loved Jon's dream in this chapter. It suits his character so well. I must admint that I kind of surprised me that Iliya sleept with him though but after I thought about it I think that it somehow fits her character as well.
Soo, because I have not reviewed any of the other chapters, short summary: I love all of them! Please never let this story end and pleeeeease update the next chapter ;) I am dying :D
I love how you even keep some of the origial Dialogues and just add Ily.
To the Theon/OC Idea: I really don't know what to think about Theon Greyjoy. I think he has a really vunrable and emotional side but he acts like a douche simply because he's trying to hide that otehr side of him. I am not his biggest fan but I think that would read the story...as long as you still continue on Jon's story (; He's just my very favorite character EVER.
Soo I hope that my review was sort of helpfull and I hope you'll read it (;
And sorry If my English is kind of bad, I'm german
Okay I really can't wait for this story to continue! I love Jon and I think your Iliya is a great character too! You're style of writing then perfectly fits into the whole novel of GOT. I can't wait to read how it goes on with Ily and Jon! I kind of want them to be a couple (;
I absolutly loved Jon's dream in this chapter. It suits his character so well. I must admint that I kind of surprised me that Iliya sleept with him though but after I thought about it I think that it somehow fits her character as well.
Soo, because I have not reviewed any of the other chapters, short summary: I love all of them! Please never let this story end and pleeeeease update the next chapter ;) I am dying :D
I love how you even keep some of the origial Dialogues and just add Ily.
To the Theon/OC Idea: I really don't know what to think about Theon Greyjoy. I think he has a really vunrable and emotional side but he acts like a douche simply because he's trying to hide that otehr side of him. I am not his biggest fan but I think that would read the story...as long as you still continue on Jon's story (; He's just my very favorite character EVER.
Soo I hope that my review was sort of helpfull and I hope you'll read it (;
And sorry If my English is kind of bad, I'm german
8/23/2012 c10 Mitternachtstraum
Wow, I think your story is really great!
Not only is your story focusing on Jon, which may I add is something only a few authors are doing (pity), but your OC is wonderfully written.
And I think its great that your building the romance between Jon and your OC, and don't let them jump each other after a few days ;)
But honestly, I nearly ripped my hair out, because they took so long to really jump each other bones. But thats exactly what I like about your writing. You take your time with the characters and let the reader get an impression
of them.
I hope you're updating the story soon, I'd like to know how it continues.
Wow, I think your story is really great!
Not only is your story focusing on Jon, which may I add is something only a few authors are doing (pity), but your OC is wonderfully written.
And I think its great that your building the romance between Jon and your OC, and don't let them jump each other after a few days ;)
But honestly, I nearly ripped my hair out, because they took so long to really jump each other bones. But thats exactly what I like about your writing. You take your time with the characters and let the reader get an impression
of them.
I hope you're updating the story soon, I'd like to know how it continues.
8/21/2012 c10 Stark-Lannister
Great chapter. An love the idea of a theon/oc story, there aren't nearly enough of them. Update soon please! x
Great chapter. An love the idea of a theon/oc story, there aren't nearly enough of them. Update soon please! x