for All That You Are12/22/2012 c5 erika
finish this story!
finish this story!
11/6/2012 c5 erika
finish this story PLEASE! I want to see more Rafe/Danny brotherly interaction!
finish this story PLEASE! I want to see more Rafe/Danny brotherly interaction!
9/1/2012 c5 erika
finish this story asap!
finish this story asap!
8/20/2012 c5 erika
finish this!
finish this!
6/2/2012 c1 fsffsfkj
Please vote pro life. A country is strong only if all human life is protect. Unborn babies are the most innocent and defenceless of all human beings.
Please vote pro life. A country is strong only if all human life is protect. Unborn babies are the most innocent and defenceless of all human beings.
5/30/2012 c1 starsky
That you,ve becoming to be to not you not grens the line as Im you,re the little riiding hood Alice are one for become when you found has not cross the line because Im self are the person from titons friforms ferforms pefore so all that you are just ask if was writer because be something that all you are to find an work who better than.
That you,ve becoming to be to not you not grens the line as Im you,re the little riiding hood Alice are one for become when you found has not cross the line because Im self are the person from titons friforms ferforms pefore so all that you are just ask if was writer because be something that all you are to find an work who better than.
4/14/2012 c5 Erika
I have been hoping for this in other moments between Danny and rafe that rafe shows affection toward Danny like an older brother to Danny. I was hoping based on this chapter that in the next one that either rafe finds a way to get loose to get to Danny or he demands or pleads with them to let him be near Danny to soothe any worries Danny has. Just giving physical contact with Danny to let his little brother k ow he's there and isn't going to leave him. Just like rafe sitting by Danny for a moment just giving a gesture of pushing danny's hair back gently and whispering comforting words to him or something.
I have been hoping for this in other moments between Danny and rafe that rafe shows affection toward Danny like an older brother to Danny. I was hoping based on this chapter that in the next one that either rafe finds a way to get loose to get to Danny or he demands or pleads with them to let him be near Danny to soothe any worries Danny has. Just giving physical contact with Danny to let his little brother k ow he's there and isn't going to leave him. Just like rafe sitting by Danny for a moment just giving a gesture of pushing danny's hair back gently and whispering comforting words to him or something.
4/8/2012 c5 heyailoveyou
Dude, no one has updated in, like, five months, so thanks. I really like the storyline, but as for some constructive criticism, I've noticed you like short, to-the-point paragraphs. I think it's not bad considering the mood of the story, but some more details or character thoughts, basically fluff, would really trigger the emotion part of the story. Other than that, it's very intriguing.
Dude, no one has updated in, like, five months, so thanks. I really like the storyline, but as for some constructive criticism, I've noticed you like short, to-the-point paragraphs. I think it's not bad considering the mood of the story, but some more details or character thoughts, basically fluff, would really trigger the emotion part of the story. Other than that, it's very intriguing.
12/22/2011 c4 
4wannabehero1212
WRITE MORE CHAPTERS YOU LEFT IT ON A CLIFF HANGER! i scrolled down to go hit next and my reaction was !
this is a very good fanfiction and i love the story line.
4wannabehero1212WRITE MORE CHAPTERS YOU LEFT IT ON A CLIFF HANGER! i scrolled down to go hit next and my reaction was !
this is a very good fanfiction and i love the story line.
12/6/2011 c4 zb
no! dont leave this unwritten! please continue its a really good story :D
no! dont leave this unwritten! please continue its a really good story :D
11/10/2011 c4 13Chaos Of A Butterfly
I love Danny! And kinda did some sort of satisfaction in nursing the characters back to health, too. But I hope Danny wake up soon! And pleasepleasepleaseplease update soon!
13Chaos Of A ButterflyI love Danny! And kinda did some sort of satisfaction in nursing the characters back to health, too. But I hope Danny wake up soon! And pleasepleasepleaseplease update soon!
9/5/2011 c4 michelle-fan
I LOVE this story it's very exciting and VERY good!:D I hope you will update soon! I really wants to see what happens! I hope they will get out of there!:D
I LOVE this story it's very exciting and VERY good!:D I hope you will update soon! I really wants to see what happens! I hope they will get out of there!:D
9/4/2011 c4 1petrova-pierce
Loved chapter four! You captures the emotions of all characters perfectly! Like I said before, I'm glad this isn't some bad, poorly written cliche plot. It's one of my favorites, & keep it up! :)
1petrova-pierceLoved chapter four! You captures the emotions of all characters perfectly! Like I said before, I'm glad this isn't some bad, poorly written cliche plot. It's one of my favorites, & keep it up! :)