for Worthy of Bella11/26/2012 c36 Guest
I liked this story to the moment we found out Edward has a baby with another woman. It completely destoyed this story for me. And Bella... What a martyr. No resentment, no jealousy, all ready to be a baby mommy. It was so very convinient that Irina died... From this moment when we found out about this baby the story become unrealistic and ridiculous.
I liked this story to the moment we found out Edward has a baby with another woman. It completely destoyed this story for me. And Bella... What a martyr. No resentment, no jealousy, all ready to be a baby mommy. It was so very convinient that Irina died... From this moment when we found out about this baby the story become unrealistic and ridiculous.
7/13/2012 c3 
6iwntyou2wntme
You've got an interesting story line here but it's difficult to read your story because your paragraphs are way too large. Space them out and I'm sure your story will be more appreciated.
6iwntyou2wntmeYou've got an interesting story line here but it's difficult to read your story because your paragraphs are way too large. Space them out and I'm sure your story will be more appreciated.
4/12/2012 c1 ThouArtLove
...I'm sorry but I couldn't read this story. My eyes are not going to follow the words when you crammed everything together in large paragraphs. I've read the reviews for this story and no one seems to be honest or is just not willing to give you an honest critic. Well I am.
1) SPACING! there is nothing worse then having to read dialogue/descriptions when it's all written in one HUGE paragraph. I was kind of surprised when you didn't do this after how many chapters.!
LACK OF REVIEWS: so.. this story has little reviews. Fix your formatting or get a beta to help with all of your mistakes.
Please edit your stories before posting them. You can even do that on your ff account if u did know this. Also, I'm not sure if you read ff stories, because it would be obvious to anyone to get the idea of formatting.
I can't comment on your story's content because I could not /will not strain my eyes to read this.
:(
...I'm sorry but I couldn't read this story. My eyes are not going to follow the words when you crammed everything together in large paragraphs. I've read the reviews for this story and no one seems to be honest or is just not willing to give you an honest critic. Well I am.
1) SPACING! there is nothing worse then having to read dialogue/descriptions when it's all written in one HUGE paragraph. I was kind of surprised when you didn't do this after how many chapters.!
LACK OF REVIEWS: so.. this story has little reviews. Fix your formatting or get a beta to help with all of your mistakes.
Please edit your stories before posting them. You can even do that on your ff account if u did know this. Also, I'm not sure if you read ff stories, because it would be obvious to anyone to get the idea of formatting.
I can't comment on your story's content because I could not /will not strain my eyes to read this.
:(
2/1/2012 c29 EdwardBellaRenesmeCullen
Damn it I waste my time read his shit story I was hope that stupid bastard dickward not father of that bitchy ugly nasty stinky Irinahoe son. Damn that stupid bella fine with it. If I know that you make dickward have baby with other bitchy I wouldnt wasted my time read this crap story.
Damn it I waste my time read his shit story I was hope that stupid bastard dickward not father of that bitchy ugly nasty stinky Irinahoe son. Damn that stupid bella fine with it. If I know that you make dickward have baby with other bitchy I wouldnt wasted my time read this crap story.
1/11/2012 c30 2Sonja Whitlock
I don't think many couples can honestly admit to not having intercourse while their baby was in the same room.
2Sonja WhitlockI don't think many couples can honestly admit to not having intercourse while their baby was in the same room.
1/9/2012 c14 Sonja Whitlock
I am reading back through your story and for the life of me can't figure out why more folks haven't reviewed. Yes, it is a little intense, but it reads well and has a good plot.
I am reading back through your story and for the life of me can't figure out why more folks haven't reviewed. Yes, it is a little intense, but it reads well and has a good plot.
1/9/2012 c29 Sonja Whitlock
This is a serious roller coaster ride of a story. Edward and Bella are definitely going to have their hands full raising a child addicted to drugs from the start.
This is a serious roller coaster ride of a story. Edward and Bella are definitely going to have their hands full raising a child addicted to drugs from the start.
1/8/2012 c29 frostedglaze
I am still in denial. I am really hoping Irina paid someone off to fix the paternity test. Then again no one has heard from her lawyer.
I am still in denial. I am really hoping Irina paid someone off to fix the paternity test. Then again no one has heard from her lawyer.