for Four Swords6/14 c1 
35SoulEmbrace2010
This is an idea I had for one of my stories in my Naru crossover series. And I have to say, not bad! I love it!
35SoulEmbrace2010This is an idea I had for one of my stories in my Naru crossover series. And I have to say, not bad! I love it!
4/27 c2 1Impaler98
Mate you should totally continue this cuase this stuff right here is awesome if not a bit OOC at some bits
1Impaler98Mate you should totally continue this cuase this stuff right here is awesome if not a bit OOC at some bits
3/14 c2 Guest
This is a great story, hope it hasn't gone dead, even if it hasn't been updated in a year.
This is a great story, hope it hasn't gone dead, even if it hasn't been updated in a year.
12/6/2012 c2 cybercorpsesnake
Another good chapter, just hope the loli thing doesn't go on forever and they return to normal
Another good chapter, just hope the loli thing doesn't go on forever and they return to normal
12/6/2012 c1 cybercorpsesnake
Really great start to the story, well written. Can't wait to see how it turns out with four girls.
Really great start to the story, well written. Can't wait to see how it turns out with four girls.
9/6/2012 c2 BBWulf
hahahaha! X'D i loved this... part of the chapter _' anyway, i cant wait fir more, keep up the good work
hahahaha! X'D i loved this... part of the chapter _' anyway, i cant wait fir more, keep up the good work
8/25/2012 c2 9Shadows of Vanity
I do wish you would continue this story, although the POV you chose might want to change to first or third person
9Shadows of VanityI do wish you would continue this story, although the POV you chose might want to change to first or third person