for Dreaming of Sunshine5h ago c67 
1ToAruKagakuNoPersona
After re-reading this, I really want to see Shikako go up against Deidara.
1ToAruKagakuNoPersonaAfter re-reading this, I really want to see Shikako go up against Deidara.
7h ago c67 3LaughingAngelsGibberish
I absolutely adore this story! I haven't read an OC insert in years, but Shikako is quite possibly my favorite. I hope that you update soon, please! -LAG;p
3LaughingAngelsGibberishI absolutely adore this story! I haven't read an OC insert in years, but Shikako is quite possibly my favorite. I hope that you update soon, please! -LAG;p
17h ago c67 1Beyond the Pen
I just wanna take the time to say that I am in love with this fanfic and have had many an affair with the other fanfics I follow just to read this over and over and over again. Please update soon :)
1Beyond the PenI just wanna take the time to say that I am in love with this fanfic and have had many an affair with the other fanfics I follow just to read this over and over and over again. Please update soon :)
5/17 c67 5Kuro no Saisei
A really good story, I usually don't like self-inserts but this is really well done. Looking forward to the next chapter! :P
5Kuro no SaiseiA really good story, I usually don't like self-inserts but this is really well done. Looking forward to the next chapter! :P
5/17 c31 9mythamagica
I'm kind of adoring how sweet the last part of this chapter is. And how understated everything is, like yeah, he has a 9 tailed demon fox sealed in him, no biggie. Except for the shared food.
Ok, I just love the whole story in general. ) Though I'm kinda hoping that Naruto decides to pick up sealing techniques at some point, since that's a part of his bloodline. Just my personal preference though, and not adding that definitely wouldn't hamper your narrative at all.
9mythamagicaI'm kind of adoring how sweet the last part of this chapter is. And how understated everything is, like yeah, he has a 9 tailed demon fox sealed in him, no biggie. Except for the shared food.
Ok, I just love the whole story in general. ) Though I'm kinda hoping that Naruto decides to pick up sealing techniques at some point, since that's a part of his bloodline. Just my personal preference though, and not adding that definitely wouldn't hamper your narrative at all.
5/15 c67 1Crackalive
Can't wait for more! I'm sorry they were separated, and I'm really racking my brains to try and find a solution for Sasuke's inactivity.
Sorry for the short review. Busy :/
1CrackaliveCan't wait for more! I'm sorry they were separated, and I'm really racking my brains to try and find a solution for Sasuke's inactivity.
Sorry for the short review. Busy :/
5/14 c62 Crackalive
Epic! Spectacular! And... "Multiplying zero still makes zero,"... hilarious!
Somehow you managed to make Kimimaro's downfall that much more interesting. I think my favorite part was when you sent Hinata to the rescue. I hope she gains some confidence from this.
"Everyone is making such dramatic entrances today," I said. That phrase deserved its spot on tvtropes.
Before I go an enjoy what little is left, I'd like to send a big thank you for writing all of this.
PS: Kiba and Shikako have some sort of comedic chemistry, Like it!
Epic! Spectacular! And... "Multiplying zero still makes zero,"... hilarious!
Somehow you managed to make Kimimaro's downfall that much more interesting. I think my favorite part was when you sent Hinata to the rescue. I hope she gains some confidence from this.
"Everyone is making such dramatic entrances today," I said. That phrase deserved its spot on tvtropes.
Before I go an enjoy what little is left, I'd like to send a big thank you for writing all of this.
PS: Kiba and Shikako have some sort of comedic chemistry, Like it!
5/14 c60 Crackalive
Wow I didn't expect such a good fight. Your hero really does have a varied fighting style, and think her increasing skill is seal-explosions is simply awesome.
Kidomaru seems to be a difficult matchup for her, and he seems as skilled as Kakashi on the short term. I don't think a knocked out Ino in her arms is helping either ;D
As usual, a great read from DoS. I'm pretty saddened that I'll reach the end of the available chapters soon, then I'll have to start waiting for updates. Don't rush because of me though; you're such a good writer, take your time to maintain the quality of the writing.
Wow I didn't expect such a good fight. Your hero really does have a varied fighting style, and think her increasing skill is seal-explosions is simply awesome.
Kidomaru seems to be a difficult matchup for her, and he seems as skilled as Kakashi on the short term. I don't think a knocked out Ino in her arms is helping either ;D
As usual, a great read from DoS. I'm pretty saddened that I'll reach the end of the available chapters soon, then I'll have to start waiting for updates. Don't rush because of me though; you're such a good writer, take your time to maintain the quality of the writing.
5/14 c24 makford
I love this story. What I like about it the most is that its not all about romance, as most of the story's these days are, I'm not saying that this story will not have any romance because this is your story, but I like that fact that there is a feeling that it could happen in this story's future. I also love the detail that you put into each chapter, really thinking about the cause and effect of the jutsu that is being used and the best way to use them. I also like that fact that even though this story is from an OC's pov. It's not centered on said OC, but more on what that OC can bring to the original Manga/Anime. All in all I really love this story and think ( and I hope you do as well) that you should continue this story with the Authors passion that you have now, and I know for a fact that I will enjoy each and every chapter to it's fullest. Thank you :)
I love this story. What I like about it the most is that its not all about romance, as most of the story's these days are, I'm not saying that this story will not have any romance because this is your story, but I like that fact that there is a feeling that it could happen in this story's future. I also love the detail that you put into each chapter, really thinking about the cause and effect of the jutsu that is being used and the best way to use them. I also like that fact that even though this story is from an OC's pov. It's not centered on said OC, but more on what that OC can bring to the original Manga/Anime. All in all I really love this story and think ( and I hope you do as well) that you should continue this story with the Authors passion that you have now, and I know for a fact that I will enjoy each and every chapter to it's fullest. Thank you :)
5/13 c16 Solninja
I love the detail you put into this story, it also one of my favs.
I love the detail you put into this story, it also one of my favs.
5/13 c67 1brica
I'd came across this story a way back, before I'd made an account on here, and I remembered liking it whenI came across it again.
Turns out I still like it.
I'm really a fan of self inserts, and this story has all the ingredients needed for a good one; good & realistic characterization, and well-made (believable/realistic) world-building!
... I know I'm not all too good at saying it, but I actually just meant to say that I love this story.
1bricaI'd came across this story a way back, before I'd made an account on here, and I remembered liking it whenI came across it again.
Turns out I still like it.
I'm really a fan of self inserts, and this story has all the ingredients needed for a good one; good & realistic characterization, and well-made (believable/realistic) world-building!
... I know I'm not all too good at saying it, but I actually just meant to say that I love this story.
5/13 c67 6Angelic Fluffle
Can't wait for the next chapter! I won't give a long review, since you probably have pages of them to read through, but I love your writing style!
Fluffle out!
6Angelic FluffleCan't wait for the next chapter! I won't give a long review, since you probably have pages of them to read through, but I love your writing style!
Fluffle out!
5/13 c67 3Silvanon of the Orchard
I'm so glad I decided to read this fic! You're doing a truly amazing job with it. I'll be anxiously awaiting the next installment!
3Silvanon of the OrchardI'm so glad I decided to read this fic! You're doing a truly amazing job with it. I'll be anxiously awaiting the next installment!
5/13 c67 Nessa671
Please update soon.
Please update soon.