for Who I Am Inside8/28/2012 c4 
2Kitty in Boots
A small bit of reversed roles. Well, not exactly. Roger always sits in his office and does nothing to help anyone. Heinz is always the active one. Oh, and great story! I wish that you updated it, though.
2Kitty in BootsA small bit of reversed roles. Well, not exactly. Roger always sits in his office and does nothing to help anyone. Heinz is always the active one. Oh, and great story! I wish that you updated it, though.
12/11/2011 c4 Midnight4568
About the end: I KNEW IT WAS HIM! But at first I thought it would have been Charlene Doofenshmirtz.
Please update this story soon, I can't wait to read the next chapter!
About the end: I KNEW IT WAS HIM! But at first I thought it would have been Charlene Doofenshmirtz.
Please update this story soon, I can't wait to read the next chapter!
9/18/2011 c3 2SeaChick
When Doofenshmirtz gets the muffin basket I can't help bu think "It's Muffin Time, Sir!"
2SeaChickWhen Doofenshmirtz gets the muffin basket I can't help bu think "It's Muffin Time, Sir!"
9/11/2011 c4 1tailsfan54321
this has to be one of the best fanfics I've read in a long time. it's well thought out, well writin and well, its just awesome.
1tailsfan54321this has to be one of the best fanfics I've read in a long time. it's well thought out, well writin and well, its just awesome.
9/9/2011 c4 5Jaddis
This should really be an episode, except for the blood and stuff. Still Disney. I like how Doffenshmirtz is conflicted with his feelings of being good, and it didn't help him when he realized Vanessa looked up to him again. I personally liked the twist at the ending. Just another connection no one knows about. My only suggestion: More Perry!
5JaddisThis should really be an episode, except for the blood and stuff. Still Disney. I like how Doffenshmirtz is conflicted with his feelings of being good, and it didn't help him when he realized Vanessa looked up to him again. I personally liked the twist at the ending. Just another connection no one knows about. My only suggestion: More Perry!
9/7/2011 c4 13KingofJesters
I love this story. I feel so bad for Phineas, and I totally get what Ferb is going through. I love Ferb.
And poor Doofenshmirtz! I love how he feels conflicted, especially when Vanessa is proud of him and all that.
I also love the twist at the end! I never liked Roger in the show, so this is perfect to satisfy my intense dislike. :) Great work, I can't wait for an update! Cheers~KingofJesters
13KingofJestersI love this story. I feel so bad for Phineas, and I totally get what Ferb is going through. I love Ferb.
And poor Doofenshmirtz! I love how he feels conflicted, especially when Vanessa is proud of him and all that.
I also love the twist at the end! I never liked Roger in the show, so this is perfect to satisfy my intense dislike. :) Great work, I can't wait for an update! Cheers~KingofJesters
9/7/2011 c4 418711
i am in total shock.
this was AMAZING!
i nearly lost it when Ferb starting crying.
and i never would have guessed Roger.
w.o.w.
...
seriously...this was amazing.
418711i am in total shock.
this was AMAZING!
i nearly lost it when Ferb starting crying.
and i never would have guessed Roger.
w.o.w.
...
seriously...this was amazing.
9/6/2011 c4 1igbogal
Wow, what a twist! I have to wonder if Roger's actions will come back to bite him in the keister. Ferb had some lovely, touching moments, and it was interesting to see how Doof's evil-life crisis is coming along. In an even more shocking development, Vanessa showed something other than bored disdain! ;) I have no idea how things are going to go from here, which is just how I like my fiction...please continue!
1igbogalWow, what a twist! I have to wonder if Roger's actions will come back to bite him in the keister. Ferb had some lovely, touching moments, and it was interesting to see how Doof's evil-life crisis is coming along. In an even more shocking development, Vanessa showed something other than bored disdain! ;) I have no idea how things are going to go from here, which is just how I like my fiction...please continue!
9/6/2011 c4 16Today-Only-Happens-Once
Well...wasn't THAT an interesting twist. I'd say it was ooc, but you don't know enough of his character, only the little song and dance he put on for others and you clearly made your point about that. :) I like the twist. It was well fitting with the whole "what makes someone good and what makes someone bad?" point that this story is about. Ferb was so adorable in an in-character kind of way. Vanessa and Doofenshmirtz was a great touch too. Phineas was really in character, with teh way he was comforting Ferb. Overall great chapter and looking foward to more! :D :D :D
16Today-Only-Happens-OnceWell...wasn't THAT an interesting twist. I'd say it was ooc, but you don't know enough of his character, only the little song and dance he put on for others and you clearly made your point about that. :) I like the twist. It was well fitting with the whole "what makes someone good and what makes someone bad?" point that this story is about. Ferb was so adorable in an in-character kind of way. Vanessa and Doofenshmirtz was a great touch too. Phineas was really in character, with teh way he was comforting Ferb. Overall great chapter and looking foward to more! :D :D :D
9/5/2011 c4 60PhoenixWormwood137
It was Roger? I hate him even more now. I liked that twist though.
"It's my fault, it should have been me that got hit." was so touching. Seriously. Awwww. That is so adorable, awesome, and great characterization, I feel. Ferb - I love Ferb.
Anyway, great work.
60PhoenixWormwood137It was Roger? I hate him even more now. I liked that twist though.
"It's my fault, it should have been me that got hit." was so touching. Seriously. Awwww. That is so adorable, awesome, and great characterization, I feel. Ferb - I love Ferb.
Anyway, great work.
9/5/2011 c4 6TheCuriousWriter
What a twist of events! Roger, the glorified son of the Doofenshmirtz's, finally in a situation where he is in a position to bring shame to the family. How will he react knowing that his own brother, the black sheep of the family, was the better person for once? What suspense!
The scene between Vanessa and Doofenshmirtz was adorable, and it definitely added some weight to Doofenshmirtz consideration of being good versus evil.
Now to what I consider a heavy part of this chapter: Ferb. Poor Ferb. It seems as though he's having his fair share of survivor's guilt, which goes to show how loving a brother he really is to Phineas. The way Phineas handled Ferb's apology was brilliant too.
Another amazing job well done! Good luck on the next chapter. :)
6TheCuriousWriterWhat a twist of events! Roger, the glorified son of the Doofenshmirtz's, finally in a situation where he is in a position to bring shame to the family. How will he react knowing that his own brother, the black sheep of the family, was the better person for once? What suspense!
The scene between Vanessa and Doofenshmirtz was adorable, and it definitely added some weight to Doofenshmirtz consideration of being good versus evil.
Now to what I consider a heavy part of this chapter: Ferb. Poor Ferb. It seems as though he's having his fair share of survivor's guilt, which goes to show how loving a brother he really is to Phineas. The way Phineas handled Ferb's apology was brilliant too.
Another amazing job well done! Good luck on the next chapter. :)
9/5/2011 c4 16crazymusicalgenius96
Roger...oh Roger. I've never liked him much either. I guess he inherited some evil too...
16crazymusicalgenius96Roger...oh Roger. I've never liked him much either. I guess he inherited some evil too...