Reviews: Forsaken One

for Forsaken One

11/14/2012 c2 Larisya
Really? Sumerian?

8/25/2012 c4 Guest
AWWWWWWWW 2 BAD WELL HOPE U FINISH THEM SOON AND GOOD LUCK!

1/3/2012 c4

5Ofunu
Aw man! I just found out about this story, and it's great! Please come back soon.

9/3/2011 c1

26krasni
You put Jason or Jacob as the brother of Rose.

And Harry.

The sotory says Harry/Oc.

Moon Knight will be Harry

Or is a error and Harry is the brother of Rose.

A greeting

9/3/2011 c1 Naginator
Made one mistake you called him jason and jacob