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5/14 c1 thackebeil1
Rich people have way too much time on their hands...
5/11 c29 1DwroulaCullen
oh :( this chapter was so sad! but he had it coming! i cant wait to see whats going to happen!
5/9 c29 frostedglaze
Grad school is a killer, so congrats for not going insane!

As for Edward, he is just cruel. He claimed that the bet meant nothing to him, but it would have destroyed Bella. I hope Bella does break up with him. He wanted to crush Bella simply because she did not fall for his playboy ways.
5/7 c29 1bb120
OMG! I have started to love this story, unique plot and drama (a breath of fresh air in ff). Can't wait to see what happens with the story!

Really hoping to see how Edward is going to improve himself some more and where his relantionship with Bella goes!
5/3 c4 16LADARTHA
An intriguing story. Waiting to see exactly when the bet is going to backfire and bite him in the butt.
5/3 c29 Kaorilamb
no matter i still blame rose for blowing this our of per portion. i feel sorry for edward. cant wait for the next chapter
4/30 c29 marismom
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4/28 c29 4edwardsfavoritebrunette
Wowzas I'm getting stressed just reading about how much you have to do! Can't even imagine thinking about writing with that kind of schedule. Thanks for not giving up and forging ahead! Can't wait to see what Bella decides :) best of luck to you!
4/28 c29 1xxBurningInfernoxx
Honestly Rose is a bitch. I think she was just waiting for Edward to mess up too. Some things aren't your things to share. She said who knows if he'd even tell her the truth since they've been lying to them this whole time? The only people it should've involved was Jasper, Edward and Bella. When Mike tells her that she calls Emmett right away to apologise? She can't think of any other relationships she's ruined first the first thing she thinks is fixing hers. She's a self centered bitch. I can not stand her in this story. Enough of my rant, great story lol. :D
4/27 c29 Courtney37
Oh my heart! Poor Edward :( I'm so glad mike told Rosalie off bc he's right, it didnt concern her and it wasnt her business. I hope Bella doesn't do anything drastic. Thanks again.
4/21 c29 GorGirl
Just got caught up. Love your story! I'm glad to see Edward conviction to make himself an even better Edward. Mike did an amazing job putting things into perspective for hormonal Rosalie. I hope he can do it for Bella, too!
4/20 c4 1beckaboo924
Oi! If he's still working in that bet he just gained himself negative points!
4/20 c1 beckaboo924
This fic seems like it would be a fun ride! Xo
4/20 c23 Avijenn1942
love this story
4/19 c1 16LADARTHA
Has the starting of an interesting story.
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