for Unexpected4/17/2012 c1 TheTruthAboutForeverMore
So this is my second time reading this story and I loved it even more than I did the first time. This so needs a sequel, I am not above begging. pleaseeeeeeeeeeeee!
So this is my second time reading this story and I loved it even more than I did the first time. This so needs a sequel, I am not above begging. pleaseeeeeeeeeeeee!
9/19/2011 c1 sasharose11
I really enjoyed this story and the pairing. I liked that Peter finally saw something in himself that had partially pushed Jasper away and quickly tried to fix it. Pleasantly surprised to find Mike still there in the morning, I was afraid his insecurities would get the best of him and run out.
I really enjoyed this story and the pairing. I liked that Peter finally saw something in himself that had partially pushed Jasper away and quickly tried to fix it. Pleasantly surprised to find Mike still there in the morning, I was afraid his insecurities would get the best of him and run out.
9/17/2011 c1 
7prassacut
I had a great time reading. I really enjoyed both your story and pairing.
It's a great story so thank you for writing it!
good luck!
7prassacutI had a great time reading. I really enjoyed both your story and pairing.
It's a great story so thank you for writing it!
good luck!
9/13/2011 c1 7mrsbeas
What a cute story! I love the idea of a slightly twinky Mike, and I really enjoyed the unusual pairing. Would definitely love to read more (hint, hint, nudge). Thanks for sharing.
7mrsbeasWhat a cute story! I love the idea of a slightly twinky Mike, and I really enjoyed the unusual pairing. Would definitely love to read more (hint, hint, nudge). Thanks for sharing.
9/11/2011 c1 7Malice Slashlover
'Oh':D I really liked the pairings you chose and you did a great job of describing the characters. I'd love to hear more of what happens between Mike and Peter in the coming days too.
7Malice Slashlover'Oh':D I really liked the pairings you chose and you did a great job of describing the characters. I'd love to hear more of what happens between Mike and Peter in the coming days too.
9/11/2011 c1 17CherBella
What a lovely story! I loved that Peter caught himself doing to Mike (in a way) what he did to Jasper (trying ot save him. I like that he gave Mike a choice and I like that Peter was trying to take things slow with Mike. (Even if i felt so bad for Mike everytime he felt rejected. I was almost afraid he was going to leave once Peter went to bed.)
I'm glad they found each other and wouldn't mind reading a little more of them. :)
17CherBellaWhat a lovely story! I loved that Peter caught himself doing to Mike (in a way) what he did to Jasper (trying ot save him. I like that he gave Mike a choice and I like that Peter was trying to take things slow with Mike. (Even if i felt so bad for Mike everytime he felt rejected. I was almost afraid he was going to leave once Peter went to bed.)
I'm glad they found each other and wouldn't mind reading a little more of them. :)
9/11/2011 c1 sessahhh
Great pairing. I love the timid Mike. I pictured your James as movie James - leather jacket with no shirt underneath. Peter seemed like an amazing man. I'm glad he caught himself when he was making decisions for Mike. The story about Jasper going back to Edward after so many years and what Peter thought was a strong relationship was frustrating. I could understand how your Peter would be discouraged to try again after being hurt.
I think you did a wonderful job of creating the all-encompassing o/s story. It was well-written and had a defined beginning, middle, end. There was a great buildup and by the end you really wanted a happy moment for Peter and Mike. They certainly deserved it.
Good luck in the contest.
Great pairing. I love the timid Mike. I pictured your James as movie James - leather jacket with no shirt underneath. Peter seemed like an amazing man. I'm glad he caught himself when he was making decisions for Mike. The story about Jasper going back to Edward after so many years and what Peter thought was a strong relationship was frustrating. I could understand how your Peter would be discouraged to try again after being hurt.
I think you did a wonderful job of creating the all-encompassing o/s story. It was well-written and had a defined beginning, middle, end. There was a great buildup and by the end you really wanted a happy moment for Peter and Mike. They certainly deserved it.
Good luck in the contest.
9/9/2011 c1 11ArcadianMaggie
I think the part I liked the most was Peter's little epiphany about what Jasper said to him, how he was just as bad as Edward in his own way. I was thinking the same thing when he was going on about how he "saved" Jasper. Plus, there was Mike. I love Mike. I really enjoyed your story! Thank you!
11ArcadianMaggieI think the part I liked the most was Peter's little epiphany about what Jasper said to him, how he was just as bad as Edward in his own way. I was thinking the same thing when he was going on about how he "saved" Jasper. Plus, there was Mike. I love Mike. I really enjoyed your story! Thank you!
9/9/2011 c1 21bmango
That ended way too soon. I love how Peter stood up to James and helped Mike see a bit of his worth. I have hope for these two. Thanks for sharing and good luck in the contest! -b
21bmangoThat ended way too soon. I love how Peter stood up to James and helped Mike see a bit of his worth. I have hope for these two. Thanks for sharing and good luck in the contest! -b
9/9/2011 c1 7MySlashyFriend
This was lovely. A little hurt/comfort for my soul.
Thanks for sharing and good luck in the contest.
7MySlashyFriendThis was lovely. A little hurt/comfort for my soul.
Thanks for sharing and good luck in the contest.
9/8/2011 c1 2FangLang
Cool pairing! Not one i've ever read before & I really enjoyed it.
Esp had a soft spot for Mike, I hope Peter takes care of him ;) and of course Pete needs some tlc too, I think Mike will get the job done. Nice.
2FangLangCool pairing! Not one i've ever read before & I really enjoyed it.
Esp had a soft spot for Mike, I hope Peter takes care of him ;) and of course Pete needs some tlc too, I think Mike will get the job done. Nice.
9/8/2011 c1 52Fr333bird
this was very cute, I liked protective Peter and how gentle he was with Mike.
52Fr333birdthis was very cute, I liked protective Peter and how gentle he was with Mike.
9/7/2011 c1 jfk06
Awww, adorables! You did a really great job with this :) Peter & Mike both popped off the page and really felt like well developed characters. Now, how do we get you to put pen to paper for Edward & Jasper's story, eh?
Also, I had an idea: I need an "epilogue outtake" for MoMS... something that hints at the story and how it turned out just like this one does ;-)
Love it. LOVE. IT.
Awww, adorables! You did a really great job with this :) Peter & Mike both popped off the page and really felt like well developed characters. Now, how do we get you to put pen to paper for Edward & Jasper's story, eh?
Also, I had an idea: I need an "epilogue outtake" for MoMS... something that hints at the story and how it turned out just like this one does ;-)
Love it. LOVE. IT.