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5/4/2012 c10 22FanFicAddict02
Oh, Sugar Plums in Custard Dx I just realized I hadn't commented on the last chapter of this story, though I'd been completely certain I'd sent it off -_- I'm so sorry about that! I feel terrible Dx

Anyways, what a fantastic chapter 8D Oh, I just loved it so much. So many bits I just want to read all over again ^^

This chapter was so sweet. In spite of the overwhelming beginning with Jessie's conflicting emotions on the dance and with Woody, I thought the ending was very tender. Woody really does have a big heart, allowing him to eventually see the good in any situation even in spite of how high the hierarchy of his ego might be. He's so caring, and this chapter just proved this mien to his character :D

You're such a brilliant writer. I always find myself fascinated by your work, and this is of no exception whatsoever. Keep it up!
4/5/2012 c10 17Evelyn Knight
(A) Yay! You used my idea! And (B) This has to be my favorite chapter so far! I just loved the Woody/Jessie-ness in this chapter! I can totally see theme have a kind of relationship where the line between friendship and love gets blurred a lot. Keep up the great work!
3/15/2012 c9 22FanFicAddict02
Oh, My Jewiggawobbum! I'm so terribly sorry for reviewing late. I've just had a very crappy Internet connection over the last few days DX

Nonetheless, this chapter was absolutely fantastic! I've always wondered how the Round-Up Gang could've met - Woody and Jessie being childhood friends seems to make sense, as they seem to be the best of friends in the Round-Up episodes - and the way you imagined Bullseye and Jessie's first meeting is absolutely perfect! Though that man did creep me out a bit... :/

Great writing as per usual! You just have such an imagination! (I wish I had one like that...) Your writing is great and the story is brilliant! Not that I ever expect any less, of course :P

Keep up the fantastic work!
3/13/2012 c9 17Evelyn Knight
You used my idea! Yay! Poor Woody his allowance for an entire year. I wonder what other tricks Jessie has played on him though the years? Good chapter , hope to read more from you soon!
3/10/2012 c3 9MadTeaLady
update soon
2/21/2012 c8 17Evelyn Knight
I enjoyed this chapter very much, from Jessie loving Bullseye so much that she'd marry him if she could too Woody being overly curious about the birds and bees when he was younger, man my review is making this chapter sound weird doesn't it?

By the way, are we ever going to find out if Bullseye is oaky? Not that I want him to be sick, but if he is you could write chapter with Woody and Jessie staying up all night with in the barn remembering when Bullseye was a colt.
2/21/2012 c8 22FanFicAddict02
Firstly, I'd just like to say how utterly flamboyant your words are to your wriitng. My Word, you just have a knack at producing sentences that just flow so well together on the screen. You are extremely talented for someone of your age, not that I'm dismissing others, it's just your work is unique in a way. Each idiom is fresh and creatively decorated. Oh, it's just perfect!

This chapter made me laugh. Oh, Woody... He really deserved a slap then! Though I'm sure his intentions were for the better through and through nonetheless. And OH, MY GOSH! You used my idea! And you set it out superbly, not that I need to tell you this ^^

Brilliant work, as usual. Keep up the smashing work!
1/1/2012 c7 9MadTeaLady
your stories are all really cute i enjoy them very much
12/11/2011 c2 MadTeaLady
I enjoyed that chapter
12/9/2011 c1 MadTeaLady
Haha this story is cute and very well written
11/30/2011 c7 22FanFicAddict02
Yayzas! You updated! And what a superb update it was as well :)

I liked the basis of this chapter, as you've really got into the spirit of the Thanksgiving holiday. Though we don't celebrate anything of the sort over here, this chapter was really nice to read.

I think I was on the same terms as Jessie as I read through the chapter. Of course, I'm mainly a vegetarian because I hate the texture and the taste of meat, but I could symphathise with her truly - lol! That was funny when she tied Woody to the chair though. The moment between them at the end was so sweet! Woody is such a good friend, even if she did physically bind him to a chair :P

Well, good work here as usual! Looking forward to the next chapter!
11/29/2011 c7 17Evelyn Knight
Jessie tying Woody up and Pete not wanting to know why, my fave part! I felt bad for Jessie though all she wanted to do was save the turkey.

We have wild turkeys around were I live. One time my mom and I where driving in the car and we saw one just sitting by the road, It was big one, it's a cool thing to see.

I really love how Jessie and Woody interact with each other so I don't mind the dialogue. Can't wait for the next chapter!
10/15/2011 c6 22FanFicAddict02
I must say now that this chapter was unbelievably brilliant. The way you describe the pessimistic atmosphere in such a light-hearted place caught em in this chapter, and I just couldn't stop reading.

Yay! Woody's saved Jessie; I just knew he would ;) (Not to sound cliché or anything...)

Sorry for the short revew, but I'm just a little bit short on time at the moment.

Oh and, one more thing. How about a shooting contest between the Round-Up Gang? I'd love to see that.

Keep up the fantastic work!
10/12/2011 c6 17Evelyn Knight
I was just thinking about this story today and low and behold an update! Great chapter! And I loved Woody in it! It was awesome what he did.

As for a suggestion how a barn dance story?
10/4/2011 c5 22FanFicAddict02
I must say that the progression of the plot of this story is absolutely fantastic. First-rated material indeed without a question to be asked.

I loved your use of descriptions in this chapter, as it pictures the scenes vividly in my mind allowing me to enjoy the experience all the more as I read through your work. The way Woody's concerned for Jessie in such a way has his character down perfectly, need I mention the obvious bond between Bullseye and Jessie. Your style of writing makes the story all the more realistic and believable. Which is an absolutely fantastic achievement, so I hope you're really proud of yourself. It's brilliant! Or anti-rubbish as we British say if you get the inside joke. Lol.

Keep up the great work!
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