for A Hero's Journey2/29/2012 c4 
4Magic713
I am still enjoying this story. I like how Danny and Sam are closer at the beginning, because it opens up more opportunities for change. I figured that the way you have Danny and Sam's relationship, the Paulina crush would be avoided and I am fine with it.
4Magic713I am still enjoying this story. I like how Danny and Sam are closer at the beginning, because it opens up more opportunities for change. I figured that the way you have Danny and Sam's relationship, the Paulina crush would be avoided and I am fine with it.
2/28/2012 c4 5raw666
I am curious on what you will do with Vlady since Danny doesn't need to hide his powers and have little reason not reveal the mad man.
5raw666I am curious on what you will do with Vlady since Danny doesn't need to hide his powers and have little reason not reveal the mad man.
2/28/2012 c4 10Leaf Ranger
Ooohhh, does this mean Danny is going to ask Sam out to the dance? If he even goes at all? Cuz that would be awesome!
And that also brings up the question, will he have a crush on valerie? I honestly hope not, that part seemed a little...off to me, quite honestly.
OVerall, awesome chapter man.
10Leaf RangerOoohhh, does this mean Danny is going to ask Sam out to the dance? If he even goes at all? Cuz that would be awesome!
And that also brings up the question, will he have a crush on valerie? I honestly hope not, that part seemed a little...off to me, quite honestly.
OVerall, awesome chapter man.
2/28/2012 c4 11Hellbreaker
It's been so long since I've seen any updates for this story that I thought you gave up on it. Personally I have no problem with you using some of lines from the series. You still managed to create new lines to fit with the scenes, but a few lines from the original needed to stay regardless. I hope the next update comes up sooner.
11HellbreakerIt's been so long since I've seen any updates for this story that I thought you gave up on it. Personally I have no problem with you using some of lines from the series. You still managed to create new lines to fit with the scenes, but a few lines from the original needed to stay regardless. I hope the next update comes up sooner.
1/30/2012 c3 30Selonianth
*pokes* is this still going? It's got a good start but it's been a couple months.
30Selonianth*pokes* is this still going? It's got a good start but it's been a couple months.
11/25/2011 c3 3toxic-kuro
There are very few who have the God-given gift of re-writing The DP series. Even fewer use this gift wisely, using it in amazing quality and format, keeping the reader fully entertained and hanging on every word. You, my friend, are one of those even fewer people. :)
3toxic-kuroThere are very few who have the God-given gift of re-writing The DP series. Even fewer use this gift wisely, using it in amazing quality and format, keeping the reader fully entertained and hanging on every word. You, my friend, are one of those even fewer people. :)
11/1/2011 c3 2son of wind
Just started reading and I have to say that I love this story! Great chapter loved how you played it out. As for my thoughts on what you should do... I say stay with the shows timeline. so that means Memory Blank first.
2son of windJust started reading and I have to say that I love this story! Great chapter loved how you played it out. As for my thoughts on what you should do... I say stay with the shows timeline. so that means Memory Blank first.
11/1/2011 c3 18VampireFrootloopsRule
I like spikes breakthrough. It was... unexpected. But, i think dannys middle name is james, not isaiah. I cant remember what episode it is though
i also vote ultimate enemy to go first, just to shake things up a bit. Ill vote on ur poll too. Thanks for the update! More soon?
18VampireFrootloopsRuleI like spikes breakthrough. It was... unexpected. But, i think dannys middle name is james, not isaiah. I cant remember what episode it is though
i also vote ultimate enemy to go first, just to shake things up a bit. Ill vote on ur poll too. Thanks for the update! More soon?
11/1/2011 c3 7Myra the Dovahkiin
great story. keep writing. update soon. I can't wait to read more! This is getting interesting.
I can't wait for Skulker & Walker's part. Or Clockwork's. Will Dani be in it? If so you could have the Fentons adopt her and allow Wulf to stay with Danny. I would say allow Danny to keep Cujo as well. But I mostly want Dani & Wulf to stay with Danny.
7Myra the Dovahkiingreat story. keep writing. update soon. I can't wait to read more! This is getting interesting.
I can't wait for Skulker & Walker's part. Or Clockwork's. Will Dani be in it? If so you could have the Fentons adopt her and allow Wulf to stay with Danny. I would say allow Danny to keep Cujo as well. But I mostly want Dani & Wulf to stay with Danny.
11/1/2011 c3 5Underworld Angel
Yay! an update!
the episode, Parental Bonding, is next; PLEASE do NOT make Danny go with Pauline! PLEASE! The woman is a slutty, uptight, shallow **! God Almighty, please they put them together! Instead, why not just have Danny turn her skanky ** down?
also, 'Memory Blank' before 'Ultimate Enemy'
that is all
keep up those wicked updates XD
5Underworld AngelYay! an update!
the episode, Parental Bonding, is next; PLEASE do NOT make Danny go with Pauline! PLEASE! The woman is a slutty, uptight, shallow **! God Almighty, please they put them together! Instead, why not just have Danny turn her skanky ** down?
also, 'Memory Blank' before 'Ultimate Enemy'
that is all
keep up those wicked updates XD
11/1/2011 c3 8Kyuubi No Tenshi
This isn't something you can see everyday.
'Smarter then the average bear' I always loved Yogi.
8Kyuubi No TenshiThis isn't something you can see everyday.
'Smarter then the average bear' I always loved Yogi.
11/1/2011 c3 10Leaf Ranger
Hmmmm...I'm not sure on your poll. I mean, I don't see how things would be affected overall, so I don't see what the big difference would be honestly. The only ones truly affected by Ultimate Enemy were Jazz and Danny I think.
I guess I'd say go with Memory blank first, since that's how it happened in canon.
Overall, awesome chapter. Hope you can get to the next one soon, since I'm loving this story.
10Leaf RangerHmmmm...I'm not sure on your poll. I mean, I don't see how things would be affected overall, so I don't see what the big difference would be honestly. The only ones truly affected by Ultimate Enemy were Jazz and Danny I think.
I guess I'd say go with Memory blank first, since that's how it happened in canon.
Overall, awesome chapter. Hope you can get to the next one soon, since I'm loving this story.