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3/21 c1 8Grey Wolf4
A great Sousuke/Kaname one shot I liked this very much!
2/12 c1 6Cherry Blossom Angel 18
You're killing me with the cuteness!
1/18 c1 Kelly
This was also one of my favorite scenes from FMP, and you fleshed it out brilliantly. That last sentence is beautiful. Thank you for sharing this. :)
9/10/2012 c1 Jasmine
Awww! This was so cute! I loved it! So perfect and wonderful!
6/15/2012 c1 5IdiAmeanDada
I just started watching FMP a few days ago. Last night's marathon watching session ended with "The Wind Blows at Home" and this was a perfectly executed continueation. Hats off to you!
6/13/2012 c1 CapturingFlags
Oh my gosh I love it, LOVE IT! You should make a sequel to this - it would be so perfect. Just like, the day after this or something. Awesome writing :)
5/12/2012 c1 11LavenderSkies
Aww...sweet and touching.

I love that scene in the anime as well. D
3/13/2012 c1 8P.P.V.V
OMG!

You felt the same way?

I completely LOVED that episode. If Sousuke were real, I would want to hug him and comfort him for all the sadness and pain he had to endure while he was away on that mission!

The poor guy.

Kaname is his anchor in the time of storms and she doesn't even know it (which makes it better!).

You wrote this one extremely well. I loved it. The emotion and the hidden peek into the "after". It was great. I'm rambling, but you got Sousuke's mindset down pat.

If Kaname really did lose it on him, I'm certain he would have shattered, too.

No one can survive something like that without scars.

:)

Thanks for writing,

-P.P.V.V.
12/17/2011 c1 lhaine07
love it. it was a peaceful and inspiring moment in their lives
10/21/2011 c1 paintedhorizon
awww :) That was nice, and without being cheesy. Too bad the show couldn't have that ending instead!
10/11/2011 c1 12Shandrial
That was very enjoyable to read. It seems like it really is just a missing scene. That is one of my fav scenes as well. Sousuke's sweeter side is always so cute in regards to Kaname.
10/8/2011 c1 jolliapplegirl
i had wondered what sousuke was thinking after that mission. i mean that was a very stressful mission and he had a very long day. its nice that he has kaname to comfort him.
9/30/2011 c1 20Angel of Fate1
This should've definitely happened after that scene in the FMP anime! I really loved the character exploration while this was written as a tender moment of the Sousuke and Kaname pairing when Sousuke was in his most vulnerable. And the fact that this fic is in Sousuke's point of view is a nice touch as we get to see inside his head on what he's been thinking about ever since he finished that devastating mission in The Wind Blows at Home arc.

^^ Definitely, this was a scene that was the turning point of their relationship (at least in the anime since the light novel didn't include this arc), so I'm really happy you extended it into something like this. Both are too tired to interact as they always do with each other, so it doesn't screw this moment up. And it really emphasizes that Sousuke has Kaname to come back home to, always.

So, thank you for giving me this good read~
9/12/2011 c1 meeiwen
Excellent! I love it! They should revise that scene using your story.
9/8/2011 c1 1Green Phire
Lovely fic as always, and I think you've captured all that emotion silently surging between them just wonderfully! + The fact that this was from Sousuke's POV emphasized that- you make his voice seem perfectly accurate :)

So thank you so much for another little gem to add to my SouKaname collection :D
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