for Barbers are worse than mages11/3/2012 c1 
1f1reb1rd
Hahaha! Adorable fanfiction! It reminds me of the beginning of Fenris' act 3 quest when I realized that if Fenris' hair turned white from the lyrium, then he was really a ginger. O.o
1f1reb1rdHahaha! Adorable fanfiction! It reminds me of the beginning of Fenris' act 3 quest when I realized that if Fenris' hair turned white from the lyrium, then he was really a ginger. O.o
10/7/2012 c1 23Jaden Anderson
Oh my gosh. Just excellent. I love your Hawke. And Fenris! "Half the time we can't shut you up..." *laughs*
For something as mundane as a haircut, you really brought it to life. Love it!
23Jaden AndersonOh my gosh. Just excellent. I love your Hawke. And Fenris! "Half the time we can't shut you up..." *laughs*
For something as mundane as a haircut, you really brought it to life. Love it!
9/25/2012 c1 3Lilou88
That was a cavity-inducing level of sweetness right there! I awwed out loud so many times. Yay for Fenris fluff!
3Lilou88That was a cavity-inducing level of sweetness right there! I awwed out loud so many times. Yay for Fenris fluff!
4/3/2012 c1 1CreatedInFyre7
Your writing is amazing. Plain and simple. You are hereby on my Favourite Authors list :)
1CreatedInFyre7Your writing is amazing. Plain and simple. You are hereby on my Favourite Authors list :)
9/16/2011 c1 7L. Century
I had to write a review for this because it was very cute. I had tried to read some of your other stories, but I apologize, I couldn't handle the grammar errors. If I'm too focused on the mistakes, I'm not paying attention to the story. This was exceptionally well written, and you've captured a nice moment in time in this couple's relationship. Reading this, it's clear to me your niche is one-shots. I give you kudos because I epically FAIL at them and find it easier to write chapters. Great job! Bravo!
7L. CenturyI had to write a review for this because it was very cute. I had tried to read some of your other stories, but I apologize, I couldn't handle the grammar errors. If I'm too focused on the mistakes, I'm not paying attention to the story. This was exceptionally well written, and you've captured a nice moment in time in this couple's relationship. Reading this, it's clear to me your niche is one-shots. I give you kudos because I epically FAIL at them and find it easier to write chapters. Great job! Bravo!
9/15/2011 c1 13HedgeNinja
"Big white mop" *snigger*. I have an image of a Persian cat that hasn't been brushed for too long. Nice fill except for one point, the use of 'fruit' as an insult really jarred me out of the humour, since homophobia isn't the focus of the story.
13HedgeNinja"Big white mop" *snigger*. I have an image of a Persian cat that hasn't been brushed for too long. Nice fill except for one point, the use of 'fruit' as an insult really jarred me out of the humour, since homophobia isn't the focus of the story.
9/8/2011 c1 9Enchanter T.I.M
I think that can-can your thinking of is the Remigold, but other than that I support Letti's ideas. Maybe even throw in a caveman theme...no wait that seems smut fueled. OH about amazons, no nix that one too. Meh at this point you could make a oneshot high fantasy parody with Fenris literally being Fenrir/Fenris and Hawke the moon he gets to gobble up. *nudge nudge*
9Enchanter T.I.MI think that can-can your thinking of is the Remigold, but other than that I support Letti's ideas. Maybe even throw in a caveman theme...no wait that seems smut fueled. OH about amazons, no nix that one too. Meh at this point you could make a oneshot high fantasy parody with Fenris literally being Fenrir/Fenris and Hawke the moon he gets to gobble up. *nudge nudge*
9/8/2011 c1 7Letticiae
What a sweet story! There's no end to your creativity! Maybe you could start another series of Hawke/Fenris one-shots, focusing in the begining of their relationship, the blossoming of their feelings, while doing this day by day stuff. They could go together to comission a custom-made armor for her and he would get a glimpse of her naked body, take a walk with her dog around Hightown, get lost (just the two of them)during a mission in the wounded coast, shock all the nobles going together to a ball in the Viscount's Keep, have an awkward dinner with Leandra to introduce Fenris to her... I don't know. What do you think?
7LetticiaeWhat a sweet story! There's no end to your creativity! Maybe you could start another series of Hawke/Fenris one-shots, focusing in the begining of their relationship, the blossoming of their feelings, while doing this day by day stuff. They could go together to comission a custom-made armor for her and he would get a glimpse of her naked body, take a walk with her dog around Hightown, get lost (just the two of them)during a mission in the wounded coast, shock all the nobles going together to a ball in the Viscount's Keep, have an awkward dinner with Leandra to introduce Fenris to her... I don't know. What do you think?
9/8/2011 c1 5Ninjapocalypse2
Aww! That was awesome! That was so funny and sweet! Brilliant idea, and you should write more :3 :D
5Ninjapocalypse2Aww! That was awesome! That was so funny and sweet! Brilliant idea, and you should write more :3 :D
9/8/2011 c1 4BasilMacVae
hehe, Fenris reminds me of one of my little brothers in this. Carver, too. Same brother. He was terrified of getting his hair cut for the longest time, and now he wants to look like an anime character with long "silky" locks. Shame, because he's got really poofy hair.
4BasilMacVaehehe, Fenris reminds me of one of my little brothers in this. Carver, too. Same brother. He was terrified of getting his hair cut for the longest time, and now he wants to look like an anime character with long "silky" locks. Shame, because he's got really poofy hair.