1/3 c4 18Meteoricshipyards
Was doing OK until you added Anya and Jenny, who seem to be gender bending.

I'm not sure Xander would leave the other girls out in the hall without clothes. He would at least give them their clothes, and maybe some money so they could get some coffee, and set up a return time.

There is also the elephant in the room - it's not legal to marry more than one woman. You have to either explain that, or allow exceptions for meta-humans, or have Nevada the first polygamous state in a hundred (or so) years, or something.

But this looks like a fun story. I'd like to see Xander get involved with the his girls with a super villain attack and prove himself.

Bekah seems like a great OC. Watch out for her becoming a Mary Sue. Just give her some disadvantages.

Hope you return to this story. The author note says you have at least two more chapters. Please post them.

Thank you,

Tom A.

1/6/2012 c4 Zarthrax
So far, so good. I'm liking the way this is going, even if Bekah feels a bit too improbable. Still, this is comic book reality we're discussing, so worse things have happened.

Can't wait for a new chapter.

12/18/2011 c4 TharzZzDunN
Gah! Waiting on the next chapter, like it already so anytime you've got some ready serve it up!

9/21/2011 c4 sh8ad8ow
great chapter can´t wait for more please continue soon, I so want to see Xander explain the the real world to his new wives and that it´s literaly a kill or be killed kind of world, jeje and how that throws their world view.

9/12/2011 c2 sh8ad8ow
great chapter can´t wait to see what happens when the other wake up.

9/11/2011 c1 6Prinny Ramza
Holyshit, he's either the luckiest guy in the world or thse girls will kill him when he wakes up. Than again those two are mutally exclusive. Anyway I like the writing and the idea so continuing would be much appreciated.

9/10/2011 c1 11Heliosion
Will Harry Potter be updated some day this century but awesome fic all the same