for Azure, the oneshots12/6/2011 c1 
12Zexion12
Very boring nothing really exciting going on plus who still writes about narnia it's so nerdish
-Zexion12
12Zexion12Very boring nothing really exciting going on plus who still writes about narnia it's so nerdish
-Zexion12
9/17/2011 c1 lost-in-elysium
I loved it! I think this one-shot was well written, and I really liked the platonic relationship Ailena and Peter share. In some way, I find it cute. Your OC is very likeable, too. She's not annoying, she's very believable, and I want to praise you for that. I hope I'll read more about her in the future.
Oh, yes. The idea of Peter marrying his own sister is repulsive. Thank goodness he wasn't forced to marry someone he didn't love in that way.
The 'her' is supposed to be unspecified? I thought that referred to Susan. Now I wonder who brought up the idea of Peter marrying his sister... I actually would like to know how Susan reacted to it also. Hmm...
This was a great one shot. I hope you'll be posting more of these soon. And keep up the good work! :D
I loved it! I think this one-shot was well written, and I really liked the platonic relationship Ailena and Peter share. In some way, I find it cute. Your OC is very likeable, too. She's not annoying, she's very believable, and I want to praise you for that. I hope I'll read more about her in the future.
Oh, yes. The idea of Peter marrying his own sister is repulsive. Thank goodness he wasn't forced to marry someone he didn't love in that way.
The 'her' is supposed to be unspecified? I thought that referred to Susan. Now I wonder who brought up the idea of Peter marrying his sister... I actually would like to know how Susan reacted to it also. Hmm...
This was a great one shot. I hope you'll be posting more of these soon. And keep up the good work! :D
9/12/2011 c1 10MaskedNarnianQueen
Hey, I'm reading through your other stories, but school is getting in the away, anyway came across this, it's really good, I agree with you on the best friend love, I have first hand experience with that.:)
MNQ
10MaskedNarnianQueenHey, I'm reading through your other stories, but school is getting in the away, anyway came across this, it's really good, I agree with you on the best friend love, I have first hand experience with that.:)
MNQ
9/11/2011 c1 FelipeMarcusThomas
I agree with you about platonic love. It's too bad that more people don't understand it. I really like your take on Narnians' reactions to their rulers' romantic affairs. After all, Narnians aren't human - thank Heaven, so why should they think like humans. I also like that in 'your' Narnia, there are no arranged marriages, though such a thing could be the catalyst for a well-written story (and has once or twice IMHO).
Nicely done.
I agree with you about platonic love. It's too bad that more people don't understand it. I really like your take on Narnians' reactions to their rulers' romantic affairs. After all, Narnians aren't human - thank Heaven, so why should they think like humans. I also like that in 'your' Narnia, there are no arranged marriages, though such a thing could be the catalyst for a well-written story (and has once or twice IMHO).
Nicely done.