for The Last Thing You Never See3/3 c18 
3witchbaby300
Look I know you haven't updated this story since dinosaurs roamed the earth but you have to or I may die! Sounds dramatic but I'm emotionally invested in this story now and I might die of a broken heart which is a real thing. So please update! I love this story!
3witchbaby300Look I know you haven't updated this story since dinosaurs roamed the earth but you have to or I may die! Sounds dramatic but I'm emotionally invested in this story now and I might die of a broken heart which is a real thing. So please update! I love this story!
9/17/2012 c18 3Beatbuyredd
hehehe MORE PLEASE! I love this story and I love this show so this is the one story on this site I am actually on edge waiting for! :] very good
3Beatbuyreddhehehe MORE PLEASE! I love this story and I love this show so this is the one story on this site I am actually on edge waiting for! :] very good
9/16/2012 c18 10quantumparadigm
Goddamn my heart is beating so fast, trying to burst out of my chest. I mean AKSFNSKDFHLSKDFNKLFDN JUST TALK TO EACH OTHER OKAY.
OKAY?!
Cami's so used to burying her feelings, and now that they've snuck up on her, she's afraid of rejection... and then Ronon is leaving...
AUGH.
Apt ME quote is apt: "No one ever fell in love without being a little bit brave."
JUST.. JUST TELL EACH OTHER.
Excuse me while I flail.
I loved this chapter and CANNOT WAIT for the next!
10quantumparadigmGoddamn my heart is beating so fast, trying to burst out of my chest. I mean AKSFNSKDFHLSKDFNKLFDN JUST TALK TO EACH OTHER OKAY.
OKAY?!
Cami's so used to burying her feelings, and now that they've snuck up on her, she's afraid of rejection... and then Ronon is leaving...
AUGH.
Apt ME quote is apt: "No one ever fell in love without being a little bit brave."
JUST.. JUST TELL EACH OTHER.
Excuse me while I flail.
I loved this chapter and CANNOT WAIT for the next!
9/15/2012 c18 16SighingWinter
You went really deep into character emotions with this one, so the shortness of the chapter really didn't bother me in the least. You're really great at givving depth to characters and it really helps that you've developed Camille and Ronon's relationship really well.
If there is one thing I would love to see in the chcomming chapters are ways that Camille's trying to bury her feelings, for example if she going on a lot of off work missions, or of she's doing early morning training.
Great job and keep up the fantastic work!
16SighingWinterYou went really deep into character emotions with this one, so the shortness of the chapter really didn't bother me in the least. You're really great at givving depth to characters and it really helps that you've developed Camille and Ronon's relationship really well.
If there is one thing I would love to see in the chcomming chapters are ways that Camille's trying to bury her feelings, for example if she going on a lot of off work missions, or of she's doing early morning training.
Great job and keep up the fantastic work!
9/15/2012 c18 1SpaceTricotRaye
Don't appologize, it's never easy to end a story... and this will be full of emotions. After confessing their feelings to other people ( ah, Sheppard confidant, I do not believe it ! Excellent !) perhaps they will reach to say the one to the other ! :-D But before or after this mission ?
I like Cami and Ronon's hesitations, questions... "Ronon's too busy living in the past to look towards the future. Or the present, for that matter." I really love this sentence. I really loved a lot of sentences of this chapter, but again my English is too bad to tell you clearly what I want to express. So, simply, thank you very much for this amazing story !
1SpaceTricotRayeDon't appologize, it's never easy to end a story... and this will be full of emotions. After confessing their feelings to other people ( ah, Sheppard confidant, I do not believe it ! Excellent !) perhaps they will reach to say the one to the other ! :-D But before or after this mission ?
I like Cami and Ronon's hesitations, questions... "Ronon's too busy living in the past to look towards the future. Or the present, for that matter." I really love this sentence. I really loved a lot of sentences of this chapter, but again my English is too bad to tell you clearly what I want to express. So, simply, thank you very much for this amazing story !
9/1/2012 c17 Lizzy
Oh my god I love your story! Not only are u spot on with every character but you also have such a strong sense of reality in your writing! There's no pointless fluff and Camilla isn't just perfect all the time, she's real :) aaarrggg thank u so much for such an awesome read looking so forward to future chapters!
Oh my god I love your story! Not only are u spot on with every character but you also have such a strong sense of reality in your writing! There's no pointless fluff and Camilla isn't just perfect all the time, she's real :) aaarrggg thank u so much for such an awesome read looking so forward to future chapters!
8/29/2012 c17 Guest
Cant wait to see where it goes
Cant wait to see where it goes
8/25/2012 c17 3Beatbuyredd
AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA AAAAAH I LOVE THIS STORY! omgosh you need to post more or I will go mad! I love this soooooo much!
3BeatbuyreddAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA AAAAAH I LOVE THIS STORY! omgosh you need to post more or I will go mad! I love this soooooo much!