for Ivy on the Wall8/10/2012 c1 
2Tilly the Wonder Pony
Hello. I've never done a review before, so I'm going to take a shot at it with yours, purely because I admire your writing style. Okay, here goes:
This is truly heart-warming. The fact that you decided to take a popular T.V. Show, and mix it with a memorial, it's something I, myself, have rarely seen, and those I have aren't all that good. But yours is great. The little bits of backstories you give Neal and Peter, and the way you use them to give the two an even stronger conection than the show neccesarily does, it's just amazing. I really like the quote you used as somewhat of a basis. I really like most of your writing (Though I kind of wish you would finish the ones you start) and hipe to see more. Keep up the good work, and I wish you luck! Tilly
2Tilly the Wonder PonyHello. I've never done a review before, so I'm going to take a shot at it with yours, purely because I admire your writing style. Okay, here goes:
This is truly heart-warming. The fact that you decided to take a popular T.V. Show, and mix it with a memorial, it's something I, myself, have rarely seen, and those I have aren't all that good. But yours is great. The little bits of backstories you give Neal and Peter, and the way you use them to give the two an even stronger conection than the show neccesarily does, it's just amazing. I really like the quote you used as somewhat of a basis. I really like most of your writing (Though I kind of wish you would finish the ones you start) and hipe to see more. Keep up the good work, and I wish you luck! Tilly
9/16/2011 c1 Oya
Touching & beautifully written
God bless you
Touching & beautifully written
God bless you
9/12/2011 c1 7govgal
nicely done! I watched the CBS special Sunday and had no idea that a film crew had been making a documentary on the life of a firefighter. the images of being inside the world trade center while the firefighters worked was chilling to say the least. I am profoundly grateful that I was not there but my heart goes out to those who were. thank you for writing this.
7govgalnicely done! I watched the CBS special Sunday and had no idea that a film crew had been making a documentary on the life of a firefighter. the images of being inside the world trade center while the firefighters worked was chilling to say the least. I am profoundly grateful that I was not there but my heart goes out to those who were. thank you for writing this.