for The French Bride3/29/2012 c15 
10Superdani4Ever
YES!FINALLY!I'M HERE!THANK YOUUUUUUUUUU!
The queen bewitched the king. She also cast her spell upon Lady Mary-oh man...
' You forget your position, Lady Culpepper.'-is she serious?
poor cousins :´(
they did not support the group who tried to destroy a queen who tried to act for the welfare of the country-thank God for that!
I hope they don't die!
again,I am so sorry for my delay!It won't happen again
10Superdani4EverYES!FINALLY!I'M HERE!THANK YOUUUUUUUUUU!
The queen bewitched the king. She also cast her spell upon Lady Mary-oh man...
' You forget your position, Lady Culpepper.'-is she serious?
poor cousins :´(
they did not support the group who tried to destroy a queen who tried to act for the welfare of the country-thank God for that!
I hope they don't die!
again,I am so sorry for my delay!It won't happen again
3/29/2012 c14 Superdani4Ever
almost there...
She tried to think that they were going to be okay but it was beyond her control and her tears rolled silently on her cheeks-I can't imagine her pain :´(
' It was a direct order from the king. He did not want to worry you.'-right,cause that was a great idea!
poor girl :´(
' I want him to come to your coronation. He will see you becoming what a son of him could never have become. And to make him suffer even more, he won't be able to talk to you.'-YOU GO HENRY!
almost there...
She tried to think that they were going to be okay but it was beyond her control and her tears rolled silently on her cheeks-I can't imagine her pain :´(
' It was a direct order from the king. He did not want to worry you.'-right,cause that was a great idea!
poor girl :´(
' I want him to come to your coronation. He will see you becoming what a son of him could never have become. And to make him suffer even more, he won't be able to talk to you.'-YOU GO HENRY!
3/29/2012 c13 Superdani4Ever
again,sorry for my delay!
I am already the babies' older and loving brother. It is enough for me.'-HOW CUTE IS HE?
But with Marina, it was different. He knew she would never judge him. She listened, gave her opinion but never tried to force him to accept it. It was relaxing-this is a first
' I'm glad she is. The queen is my ray of light. I want them to love her as I love her.'-where I heard that before? ;)
' Lady Mary, I am certain that the duke of Suffolk will never do that to you. He respects you as he respected your mother.'-true
I will not do anything again her-really?wow!
again,sorry for my delay!
I am already the babies' older and loving brother. It is enough for me.'-HOW CUTE IS HE?
But with Marina, it was different. He knew she would never judge him. She listened, gave her opinion but never tried to force him to accept it. It was relaxing-this is a first
' I'm glad she is. The queen is my ray of light. I want them to love her as I love her.'-where I heard that before? ;)
' Lady Mary, I am certain that the duke of Suffolk will never do that to you. He respects you as he respected your mother.'-true
I will not do anything again her-really?wow!
3/29/2012 c12 Superdani4Ever
I'm HERE!So sorry for my delay!
Henry had new caring and loyal subjets among the protestant faction-see?i knew it!
Lady Mary Brandon, Duchess of Suffolk, beloved daughter of King Henry-awwwwwww
I adored her letter
because he sent me the jewel of his heaven to be my wife-aww :)
Was it the way every prince of Europe see him? As a man who destroyed his wives when they did not gave him an heir?-well,yes
' I have been practicing.'-SUPER CUTE!
That was what he was searching for-about time too ;)
Until the queen's waters broke-ohhhhhhhh
I'm happy now!
I'm HERE!So sorry for my delay!
Henry had new caring and loyal subjets among the protestant faction-see?i knew it!
Lady Mary Brandon, Duchess of Suffolk, beloved daughter of King Henry-awwwwwww
I adored her letter
because he sent me the jewel of his heaven to be my wife-aww :)
Was it the way every prince of Europe see him? As a man who destroyed his wives when they did not gave him an heir?-well,yes
' I have been practicing.'-SUPER CUTE!
That was what he was searching for-about time too ;)
Until the queen's waters broke-ohhhhhhhh
I'm happy now!
3/22/2012 c15 23Vain x Life Poetess
I am glad her cousin woke up, and that Mary set the record right that they should not be doing that to anyone just because of their religion. Lovely chapters! Update soon!
23Vain x Life PoetessI am glad her cousin woke up, and that Mary set the record right that they should not be doing that to anyone just because of their religion. Lovely chapters! Update soon!
3/16/2012 c1 Isura Akimi
Truly remarkable story and Marina's character is brilliant. I do like a Lady Mary and Charles Brandon pairing. I think he is better suited to her than Philip of Bavaria dont you think.
Truly remarkable story and Marina's character is brilliant. I do like a Lady Mary and Charles Brandon pairing. I think he is better suited to her than Philip of Bavaria dont you think.
2/14/2012 c13 5Bess Woodville
Im still following you! This is Beautiful! Awesome story, if they have another daughter could it be called Elizabeth after Elizabeth Woodville in order to commemoarate Anne Boleyn a commoner And Elizabeth her namesake :))
5Bess WoodvilleIm still following you! This is Beautiful! Awesome story, if they have another daughter could it be called Elizabeth after Elizabeth Woodville in order to commemoarate Anne Boleyn a commoner And Elizabeth her namesake :))
1/13/2012 c12 23Vain x Life Poetess
very good chapter I am glad she had three children and lived through it, King Francis I words to her that she had a good family and was blessed were great as well as his private conversation with Henry. Glad to see this fic again!
~Carolina
23Vain x Life Poetessvery good chapter I am glad she had three children and lived through it, King Francis I words to her that she had a good family and was blessed were great as well as his private conversation with Henry. Glad to see this fic again!
~Carolina
1/12/2012 c12 94Lady Eleanor Boleyn
I love this chapter! I think Marina is wonderful and it's nice to see Mary getting on with a stepmother other than Jane for once...
I'm thrilled she's had two more boys to secure the Succession and another Princess...Harmony is just a perfect name for the little girl, given who her mother is...
If I had a couple of criticisms to make, it would be that Lloyd isn't a name of the period...Lionel would have been better... and I also wish you'd translated the French they spoke to one another...there are some of us who don't speak French, you know!
Other than that though, great job!
94Lady Eleanor BoleynI love this chapter! I think Marina is wonderful and it's nice to see Mary getting on with a stepmother other than Jane for once...
I'm thrilled she's had two more boys to secure the Succession and another Princess...Harmony is just a perfect name for the little girl, given who her mother is...
If I had a couple of criticisms to make, it would be that Lloyd isn't a name of the period...Lionel would have been better... and I also wish you'd translated the French they spoke to one another...there are some of us who don't speak French, you know!
Other than that though, great job!