for The French Bride11/13/2011 c9 
19Vain x Life Poetess
It was really sad hearing Edward speak like that but like Jane's ghost said, she was my favorite ghost btw in episode 4.10; Henry has locked his boy up just like his father did to him, and that has severed their relationship, but I am glad the little boy opened up to Marina and I hope she is able to do something.
~Carolina ^_^
19Vain x Life PoetessIt was really sad hearing Edward speak like that but like Jane's ghost said, she was my favorite ghost btw in episode 4.10; Henry has locked his boy up just like his father did to him, and that has severed their relationship, but I am glad the little boy opened up to Marina and I hope she is able to do something.
~Carolina ^_^
11/8/2011 c9 unnamed visitor
It’s good to see a new update to this story I was really missing it. This was a very sweet chapter and I thought Elizabeth/Edward were adorable. I also think’s good that Chapuys seems to be lightening up with Elizabeth is concerned, I always couldn’t help but think he was too hard on her. Keep up the good work and please update ASAP, I’m very much looking forward to Marina giving birth and Mary’s upcoming wedding to Charles Brandon.
It’s good to see a new update to this story I was really missing it. This was a very sweet chapter and I thought Elizabeth/Edward were adorable. I also think’s good that Chapuys seems to be lightening up with Elizabeth is concerned, I always couldn’t help but think he was too hard on her. Keep up the good work and please update ASAP, I’m very much looking forward to Marina giving birth and Mary’s upcoming wedding to Charles Brandon.
11/3/2011 c4 Bess Woodville
All this random gos at Anne Boleyn are a bit sickening... Stop mentioning her sooo much :\
All this random gos at Anne Boleyn are a bit sickening... Stop mentioning her sooo much :\
10/10/2011 c8 unnamed visitor
Excellent chapter, your writing is outstanding. Keep up the good work and please update ASAP.
Excellent chapter, your writing is outstanding. Keep up the good work and please update ASAP.
10/9/2011 c8 2Winter Stevenson
So far, I congratulate you on your story! It's wonderful, and your English is quite good for being your second language. Just, be careful of one thing. I don't know if the word "awesome" was used in this particular time period, but just to be safe, you may not want to use words typically used in modern society. Otherwise, keep it up! Looking forward to another new chapter. :)
2Winter StevensonSo far, I congratulate you on your story! It's wonderful, and your English is quite good for being your second language. Just, be careful of one thing. I don't know if the word "awesome" was used in this particular time period, but just to be safe, you may not want to use words typically used in modern society. Otherwise, keep it up! Looking forward to another new chapter. :)
9/30/2011 c7 11BoleynofAragon21
I am cheering for Marina on this, I hope she gets to have a duke of york or even a girl, it will be nice seeing another princes sin the tudor bunch. The love between her and Henry is adorable, and it was very nice of him just to add to have his daughter married to a man who will respect her.
~Nat Sarah~
11BoleynofAragon21I am cheering for Marina on this, I hope she gets to have a duke of york or even a girl, it will be nice seeing another princes sin the tudor bunch. The love between her and Henry is adorable, and it was very nice of him just to add to have his daughter married to a man who will respect her.
~Nat Sarah~
9/30/2011 c7 unnamed visitor
Wow, wow and wow brilliant as always and keep it going. If Marina is carrying twins or triplets I hope one of them will be a boy. If anything Marina deserves to have a son of her own. I am also happy for Mary and I am sure Charles will be a good husband. Not that I care because I don't but I am a little curious of what's Charles's ex-wife Catherine's reaction to all this. look forward to your next update.
P.S. If Marina has a boy and I REALLY, REALLY hope she does these are some names that I would pick: William, Edmund or Owen.
Wow, wow and wow brilliant as always and keep it going. If Marina is carrying twins or triplets I hope one of them will be a boy. If anything Marina deserves to have a son of her own. I am also happy for Mary and I am sure Charles will be a good husband. Not that I care because I don't but I am a little curious of what's Charles's ex-wife Catherine's reaction to all this. look forward to your next update.
P.S. If Marina has a boy and I REALLY, REALLY hope she does these are some names that I would pick: William, Edmund or Owen.
9/27/2011 c6 19Vain x Life Poetess
If I wasn't so sick and angered by what happened with one of my roomies I would have reivewed and read sooner. It was a good chapter once again good character Marina and she is great defending Katherine Howard.
I like Henry for not pressuring Marina into having a son and being more understanding here.
19Vain x Life PoetessIf I wasn't so sick and angered by what happened with one of my roomies I would have reivewed and read sooner. It was a good chapter once again good character Marina and she is great defending Katherine Howard.
I like Henry for not pressuring Marina into having a son and being more understanding here.
9/26/2011 c6 unnamed visitor
Brilliant as always. Keep up the excellent work and please update ASAP. I really want to know who Henry has chosen as Charles' new bride although I have a fair idea who it might be. Most of all PLEASE ,PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE AND PLEASE let Marina get pregnant soon and let it be a healthy Duke of York.
Brilliant as always. Keep up the excellent work and please update ASAP. I really want to know who Henry has chosen as Charles' new bride although I have a fair idea who it might be. Most of all PLEASE ,PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE AND PLEASE let Marina get pregnant soon and let it be a healthy Duke of York.