for Scrap Chaps3/12 c3 kungfupandabear
OMG those were amazing! Chapter 1 and 2 were so cute and funny! Ahhh! Love them!
OMG those were amazing! Chapter 1 and 2 were so cute and funny! Ahhh! Love them!
1/10 c3 
2MCH
Read all 3 chapter.
Like Cain and his visit to the Pevensie's - the driver Cameron was funny.
Jane - DNA - Peter - DNA - love - emotions - More DNA - Lucy Cain and Thomas to the rescue as glamour Jane turns into plain Jane ( I actually thought it was Edmund at first)
Last chapter Edmund's finally see a sun rise. Love the bit when Peter says the sunrise that this was for brothers something they can do together. But althoough kids he was still in charge. Something never change for for the brothers.
2MCHRead all 3 chapter.
Like Cain and his visit to the Pevensie's - the driver Cameron was funny.
Jane - DNA - Peter - DNA - love - emotions - More DNA - Lucy Cain and Thomas to the rescue as glamour Jane turns into plain Jane ( I actually thought it was Edmund at first)
Last chapter Edmund's finally see a sun rise. Love the bit when Peter says the sunrise that this was for brothers something they can do together. But althoough kids he was still in charge. Something never change for for the brothers.
12/5/2012 c3 Guest
Can't wait for Monochrome to continue! Wuhoooo!
Can't wait for Monochrome to continue! Wuhoooo!
12/2/2012 c3 Guest
Wuhooo! Looking forward to a Monochrome update! Love it. :D
Wuhooo! Looking forward to a Monochrome update! Love it. :D
12/1/2012 c3 4Rayven49
Nice :) Did you post something where the boys get up to see the sunrise before? The dialogue at the end looks particularly familiar, though the bit at the beginning is definitely different. Still, I liked it. Lovely bonding, and the squabbling when Peter tries to get Edmund up was cute.
"Narnia cast in rose and fire." Gorgeous, gorgeous prose. Gave me chills.
Looking forward to more of Monochrome!
Yours,
Rayven
4Rayven49Nice :) Did you post something where the boys get up to see the sunrise before? The dialogue at the end looks particularly familiar, though the bit at the beginning is definitely different. Still, I liked it. Lovely bonding, and the squabbling when Peter tries to get Edmund up was cute.
"Narnia cast in rose and fire." Gorgeous, gorgeous prose. Gave me chills.
Looking forward to more of Monochrome!
Yours,
Rayven
11/28/2012 c3 15Fierce Queen
I don't understand why I didn't get an alert to this! It's a great scene between the boys where they can relax and just be together. That doesn't happen much.
Wonderful job! I eagerly await any new chapter :D
Aslan's Blessings!
Fierce
15Fierce QueenI don't understand why I didn't get an alert to this! It's a great scene between the boys where they can relax and just be together. That doesn't happen much.
Wonderful job! I eagerly await any new chapter :D
Aslan's Blessings!
Fierce
11/26/2012 c3 Guest
This. is. awesome! Only I'm curious why it is deleted from Monochome?
This. is. awesome! Only I'm curious why it is deleted from Monochome?
11/26/2012 c3 27WillowDryad
Awww, I have tears in my eyes and a big smile on my face. So lovely and so sweet.
My favorite line: It was like resting against Aslan's side, when I was tucked under Peter's arm.
More please!
27WillowDryadAwww, I have tears in my eyes and a big smile on my face. So lovely and so sweet.
My favorite line: It was like resting against Aslan's side, when I was tucked under Peter's arm.
More please!
4/22/2012 c2 basaltone
Very funny chapter. At first it starts out like any other sappy (sorry, but sappy is the word to describe it-I'm betting that's what you were going for) "Peter falls in love" story, but then it breaks out into a full Naria Avengers episode. I love the Narnia Avengers. Can we scrap the cannon ending and just have years more of the Narnia Avengers? I love them all in action, including the new characters and especially kick-butt Lucy, who swoops in, like always, to save the day. Poor Peter, can't he just once attract a sensible, plain, not-into-magic girl? If he did, I guess we wouldn't love him as much. Thanks for your story.
Very funny chapter. At first it starts out like any other sappy (sorry, but sappy is the word to describe it-I'm betting that's what you were going for) "Peter falls in love" story, but then it breaks out into a full Naria Avengers episode. I love the Narnia Avengers. Can we scrap the cannon ending and just have years more of the Narnia Avengers? I love them all in action, including the new characters and especially kick-butt Lucy, who swoops in, like always, to save the day. Poor Peter, can't he just once attract a sensible, plain, not-into-magic girl? If he did, I guess we wouldn't love him as much. Thanks for your story.
4/22/2012 c1 basaltone
Wonderful chapter, I love reading about family time from the POV of an outsider who knows their secrets and can share in our awe of these remarkable people. thank you
Wonderful chapter, I love reading about family time from the POV of an outsider who knows their secrets and can share in our awe of these remarkable people. thank you
3/21/2012 c2 1Hikari Urania
Hahaha...that was adorable...poor Peter. I laughed really hard throughout the ending, especially when you mentioned that Edmund also suffered from these "attacks." Hahah, hope you update soon!
1Hikari UraniaHahaha...that was adorable...poor Peter. I laughed really hard throughout the ending, especially when you mentioned that Edmund also suffered from these "attacks." Hahah, hope you update soon!
9/24/2011 c2 4Ocean's Nocturne of the COCA
HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA! XD The beginning was hilarious, but the ending just MADE it! Lucy's so great when she's cranky! :D
4Ocean's Nocturne of the COCAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA! XD The beginning was hilarious, but the ending just MADE it! Lucy's so great when she's cranky! :D
9/21/2011 c2 9floppyearsthebunny
*chuckles* I loved the second part of this chapter. It made me laugh despite the very sad day I was having. Thanks!
9floppyearsthebunny*chuckles* I loved the second part of this chapter. It made me laugh despite the very sad day I was having. Thanks!
9/20/2011 c2 1Gallagher Girl
Ironically enough, my mood matches Lucy's almost exactly. Actually, my mood for the last couple days has actually been a bit blacker than hers...
Anyway, thank you for the wonderful chapter. :D
1Gallagher GirlIronically enough, my mood matches Lucy's almost exactly. Actually, my mood for the last couple days has actually been a bit blacker than hers...
Anyway, thank you for the wonderful chapter. :D
9/20/2011 c2 5dbd823
HAHAHAHAHA! Poor Lucy! Wow. That's soooo funny! I was starting to get confused, what with it being all romantic and all, but then I read the end. Great work! You had me cracking up at Lucy. And Jane is an idiot if she thinks she has to be pretty to be someone. I won't say anything else on that subject (I'll just go on, and on, and on...) Anyway, good chapter! I really liked it.
5dbd823HAHAHAHAHA! Poor Lucy! Wow. That's soooo funny! I was starting to get confused, what with it being all romantic and all, but then I read the end. Great work! You had me cracking up at Lucy. And Jane is an idiot if she thinks she has to be pretty to be someone. I won't say anything else on that subject (I'll just go on, and on, and on...) Anyway, good chapter! I really liked it.