for Éponine Renaît12/31/2012 c18 Eponine Sparrow
I've been completely memorized by this story! I beg you to update soon! Do you have a plan for how far into Erik's life you will go? Age-wise?
I've been completely memorized by this story! I beg you to update soon! Do you have a plan for how far into Erik's life you will go? Age-wise?
9/29/2012 c18 
1judybear236
well, I was wondering how you were going to bring this toa conclusion in only one more chapter...
Well? LOL...
Next chapter, please.
- JB
1judybear236well, I was wondering how you were going to bring this toa conclusion in only one more chapter...
Well? LOL...
Next chapter, please.
- JB
7/13/2012 c18 ComicCartoonFreak13
Eponine would have a nightmare after discussing her dreams and fears, it makes perfect sense! I've had those kind of nightmares before, last week was my most recent one. The question game was genious, I do not think you could have had them talk so openly and honestly with out it being too uncomfortable for the both of them. The best part of Eponine's nightmare was seeing how the main thing holding her back from the life she wants is herself, that she can't seem to let Marius go inspite of having both Erik and Quentin. While us readers know about this conflict, the nightmare gives Eponine a chance to physically see her inner turmoil right in front of her. As for Erik, I'm happy to see him as the little boy he really is as well as the care and love Eponine has for him and vice versa, they both needed love in their other wise lonely, pitiful lives. I'm sorry if I haven't reviewed for a while, my life has been kind of busy since May, but now its slowed down a bit again...
Eponine would have a nightmare after discussing her dreams and fears, it makes perfect sense! I've had those kind of nightmares before, last week was my most recent one. The question game was genious, I do not think you could have had them talk so openly and honestly with out it being too uncomfortable for the both of them. The best part of Eponine's nightmare was seeing how the main thing holding her back from the life she wants is herself, that she can't seem to let Marius go inspite of having both Erik and Quentin. While us readers know about this conflict, the nightmare gives Eponine a chance to physically see her inner turmoil right in front of her. As for Erik, I'm happy to see him as the little boy he really is as well as the care and love Eponine has for him and vice versa, they both needed love in their other wise lonely, pitiful lives. I'm sorry if I haven't reviewed for a while, my life has been kind of busy since May, but now its slowed down a bit again...
7/12/2012 c18 9blushed-at-a-mere-nothing
OhEmmGee, that was awesome! And I loved the Quentin/Éponine in there. Très bon, comme toujours!
Sincerely,
ÉponineJondretteGirl
9blushed-at-a-mere-nothingOhEmmGee, that was awesome! And I loved the Quentin/Éponine in there. Très bon, comme toujours!
Sincerely,
ÉponineJondretteGirl
6/6/2012 c16 A. Michelle
You are such a brilliant writer! Your stories are so captivating! Please tell me you'll update this one soon!
You are such a brilliant writer! Your stories are so captivating! Please tell me you'll update this one soon!
5/22/2012 c16 Lover of Writing4ever
Ha ha it was my pleasure! I really liked this story, Erik just seems so innocent and cute, I couldn't help but chuckle at his comments. I'm glad that you updated, I read this over the weekend, so it was a soon update for me.
I truly enjoy this story, you are a very gifted author.
Thanks so much I can't wait for the next chapter! :D
Ha ha it was my pleasure! I really liked this story, Erik just seems so innocent and cute, I couldn't help but chuckle at his comments. I'm glad that you updated, I read this over the weekend, so it was a soon update for me.
I truly enjoy this story, you are a very gifted author.
Thanks so much I can't wait for the next chapter! :D
2/26/2012 c14 ComicCartoonFreak13
What musicals are you in? Anyway, school work is a real pain sometimes, especially when you keep getting sick. I had to go to the doctors and get medicine because I was sick like a whole month and on Valentine's day! I just adore this fic and the time waiting for the next chapter adds to the suspense. At last they made it to Montreuil. Erik is just too cute with his childish antics. He is a genuis and musical prodigy, but he is still definitely a young boy who can ask very embarissing questions, ha ha ha. Unfortunately for Eponine and Quentin, he makes things even more akward between them with THAT question. I can't blame him though, Quentin does show he can be a father figure to Erik, who does not even know who is father really is. I just knew Eponine would think of a way for them to get the inn room for cheap! Um, i have nothing to add other than that I am sure the awkward tension is going to build up even more as the story goes. Will Erik get a new mask? Not that I think he should need to where it but considering the setting, time and place, I think he would be better off getting a more human like mask.
What musicals are you in? Anyway, school work is a real pain sometimes, especially when you keep getting sick. I had to go to the doctors and get medicine because I was sick like a whole month and on Valentine's day! I just adore this fic and the time waiting for the next chapter adds to the suspense. At last they made it to Montreuil. Erik is just too cute with his childish antics. He is a genuis and musical prodigy, but he is still definitely a young boy who can ask very embarissing questions, ha ha ha. Unfortunately for Eponine and Quentin, he makes things even more akward between them with THAT question. I can't blame him though, Quentin does show he can be a father figure to Erik, who does not even know who is father really is. I just knew Eponine would think of a way for them to get the inn room for cheap! Um, i have nothing to add other than that I am sure the awkward tension is going to build up even more as the story goes. Will Erik get a new mask? Not that I think he should need to where it but considering the setting, time and place, I think he would be better off getting a more human like mask.
1/15/2012 c13 ComicCartoonFreak13
*Rushes to give the sobbing author a hug* Don't worry I forgive you! I too have exams and other crazy things going on in my life, so I understand updating can be very difficult. In fact, that is why I have yet to post a fanfic with out deleting it right away. I just got over an upper respatory (sp?) infection I've had this past week, so I'm sorry if I did not review right away. As always, I review a chapter right after I read it all not just see it in my email. Anyway, I like how Erik and Eponine's bond has become closer in each chapter yet not rushed, I think that is the key part to this plot. As for the "Marius" problem, at least Eponine ackowledges that she still thinks about Him and is trying so hard to move on, actually I give her a lot of credit for that and you for writing it this way. I am not usually a fan of OCs however Quentin is well written and I can almost believe he was a part of Les Mis canon, in fact I wish he was. I personally don't blame Eponine for lashing out at Erik, she did not intend to and she stopped herself from hurting him like his "real" mother had done. Overall, all your characters are adjusting well to each other and I happen to enjoy these chapters as the highlight of my day. I'll be eagerly awaiting your next chapter. Also, I'm sorry if I sound rushed but I just finished writing and typing a couple of essays for my English project and can not type anymore because my hands and fingers are numb.
*Rushes to give the sobbing author a hug* Don't worry I forgive you! I too have exams and other crazy things going on in my life, so I understand updating can be very difficult. In fact, that is why I have yet to post a fanfic with out deleting it right away. I just got over an upper respatory (sp?) infection I've had this past week, so I'm sorry if I did not review right away. As always, I review a chapter right after I read it all not just see it in my email. Anyway, I like how Erik and Eponine's bond has become closer in each chapter yet not rushed, I think that is the key part to this plot. As for the "Marius" problem, at least Eponine ackowledges that she still thinks about Him and is trying so hard to move on, actually I give her a lot of credit for that and you for writing it this way. I am not usually a fan of OCs however Quentin is well written and I can almost believe he was a part of Les Mis canon, in fact I wish he was. I personally don't blame Eponine for lashing out at Erik, she did not intend to and she stopped herself from hurting him like his "real" mother had done. Overall, all your characters are adjusting well to each other and I happen to enjoy these chapters as the highlight of my day. I'll be eagerly awaiting your next chapter. Also, I'm sorry if I sound rushed but I just finished writing and typing a couple of essays for my English project and can not type anymore because my hands and fingers are numb.
12/21/2011 c12 ComicCartoonFreak13
Actually I've needed some fluff. I had a bad case of bad luck, bad timing, and the flu all mixed into one these past couple weeks. I'm all better now though, and my luck is back too. Anyway, The story is progressing greatly and at this point the main plot is Erik, Eponine, and Quentin getting out of Paris in one piece. I thought some Eponine and Quentin time was needed and well justified as well as Eponine still having Marius from her past life haunting her subconciousness. I am empathetic to Eponine on the issue with her struggling to completely get over Marius but I believe she is capable of doing so, especially with Erik and Quentin dominating her life. On a side note, only 15 reviews? You deserve more reviews for this fanfic! I can only review once per chapter but If I could review more I would, I really do adore this fanfic.
Actually I've needed some fluff. I had a bad case of bad luck, bad timing, and the flu all mixed into one these past couple weeks. I'm all better now though, and my luck is back too. Anyway, The story is progressing greatly and at this point the main plot is Erik, Eponine, and Quentin getting out of Paris in one piece. I thought some Eponine and Quentin time was needed and well justified as well as Eponine still having Marius from her past life haunting her subconciousness. I am empathetic to Eponine on the issue with her struggling to completely get over Marius but I believe she is capable of doing so, especially with Erik and Quentin dominating her life. On a side note, only 15 reviews? You deserve more reviews for this fanfic! I can only review once per chapter but If I could review more I would, I really do adore this fanfic.
12/21/2011 c11 ComicCartoonFreak13
I apologize for not reviewing this chapter when I first got it, I have had a crazy month, with christmas shopping, my birthday, and being sick. I do have to say that I just love this scene and blushed when you described Quentin. Please tell Erik I'm so sorry for not reviewing right away!
I apologize for not reviewing this chapter when I first got it, I have had a crazy month, with christmas shopping, my birthday, and being sick. I do have to say that I just love this scene and blushed when you described Quentin. Please tell Erik I'm so sorry for not reviewing right away!