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9/14/2011 c1 BMick
Delightfully different! Though, Merroon does have some odd effects on our guys - are you leading into something longer? Rodney touching John's head and John not immediately swatting him away seems rather out of character. And the dog comment, almost like Merroon is flattering Rodney and pushing John aside, something devious there. Possibilities...
9/14/2011 c1 12Sailor's Wife
I liked it. It's not fall off the couch funny but very amuzing!
9/14/2011 c1 12sheppardlover928
Cute story! Are you planning on adding more?

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