for Archery4/6/2012 c1 
3wallyxartemisyjlover
aww that was sad at first but then sweet! poor artemis i wouldnt want to live with a dad like that
3wallyxartemisyjloveraww that was sad at first but then sweet! poor artemis i wouldnt want to live with a dad like that
9/18/2011 c1 6TheNightwingfan
Interesting piece, I enjoyed it!
You managed to have a lot of meaning in this in short one-shot.
Really diggin' the flow as well.
Good job!
6TheNightwingfanInteresting piece, I enjoyed it!
You managed to have a lot of meaning in this in short one-shot.
Really diggin' the flow as well.
Good job!
9/17/2011 c1 Sheerwillpower
Oh my goodnesss. This is amazing! Truely amazing. It really sounds like a childs thoughts,like a child speaking. And her father not beening there when she finally did make it:( awwww. The plot was fantastic,,imagery was great, structure was perfect. This was a really cute story, and I really enjoyed reading this!
Oh my goodnesss. This is amazing! Truely amazing. It really sounds like a childs thoughts,like a child speaking. And her father not beening there when she finally did make it:( awwww. The plot was fantastic,,imagery was great, structure was perfect. This was a really cute story, and I really enjoyed reading this!
9/16/2011 c1 9Rowanfall
Awww, that was adorable! The style of writing was very nice, and it flowed very well. Wonderful one-shot! I do wish there was more!
Till next time,
The Rowan of the Fall
(Rowanfall)
9RowanfallAwww, that was adorable! The style of writing was very nice, and it flowed very well. Wonderful one-shot! I do wish there was more!
Till next time,
The Rowan of the Fall
(Rowanfall)
9/16/2011 c1 3SlenderLoris
Beautiful and sad. I loved it. It really explains some of Artemis's attitude. Great work!
3SlenderLorisBeautiful and sad. I loved it. It really explains some of Artemis's attitude. Great work!
9/16/2011 c1 11Scarlette Smith
Aww, dude this is so sad! I know this dosne't make sense, but I kinda get how Artemis was feeling, not that extreme, but... y'know? Either way it was sad, but good! Update soon!
11Scarlette SmithAww, dude this is so sad! I know this dosne't make sense, but I kinda get how Artemis was feeling, not that extreme, but... y'know? Either way it was sad, but good! Update soon!