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4/2 c1 5Dimentio's Epic Girlfriend
Why?

Ouch.

Ouch.

This...OUCH.
12/13/2012 c5 8Ice assassin Ace
dear epic man/girl who made this epic story that makes most mlp fanfics look gay

if this was a movie i would buy it

spike is a furry? who cares idiots think furrys are bad thay are like bronies/cloppers

anyway applejack is a redneck fuck head who makes me ice assassin ace look like chuck norris

you make good stories this one is a story that shows that you can make cap-locks look good

you make me shit my self

and sonic is good man

pm me

peace out maggots
5/11/2012 c5 PLOIKMJUYHNBGTRFVCDEWSXZAQ
It bothers me that the other (“serious”, “professional”) reviewers fail to see that this is not an actual trollfic, but instead a parody of said subgenre. For example, I caught a few My Immortal refrences: “IT WAS COLD AND HOT” and, “NOT IN THAT WAY PERVERTS”. Anyway, this is wicked funny. I love how you twisted around the words pf the “professionals”. Lots of good qoutes, too. But I have one question... WHEN ARE YOU GONNA UPDATE IT? I NEED MOAR!
5/1/2012 c5 Gigagamer3000
Dude...when the fuck are you gonna get a update?
4/30/2012 c3 i love coco
wow...

I offishly hate your story now. You got the nerv to say that twilight is now a loser? You know what? You should not write stories of what you hate , cause thats just plane stupid.If you really think that mixing up Sonic the hedgehog and Rainbow dash is normal, then that is what gets people confused.

Your a troll and you know it. Your just to lazy to admit it.You have Applejack being stupid, mixed up the names of STH and RD, you have twilight as a loser.

Look on the bright side, your other stories i love
4/29/2012 c3 i love coco
i'm really sorry
4/29/2012 c2 i love coco
Do you really think making fun of apple jack is going to solve peoples problem? NO! Apple jack is my fav caractor! Your caps are redickoulous, your being mean to apple jack. OK you hate her, I get it, we all do ,this DOSE NOT mean you get to make her stupid. You think your awesome? DO YOU THINK YOUR AN AWESOME WRITER? Next time write a better strory 'awesome writer'.
4/29/2012 c1 Guest
step 1 : lowercase

step 2 : make better sentences
3/29/2012 c1 tru honust
I really wanted to read it, but the others are right ; the capslock is a bit hard on my lazy miopic eyes as well.
1/1/2012 c2 Iggyismypyro
:( first of all you being mean to Applejack isn't that funny and southern people get good educations I'm southern and I'm getting mostly a's the rest are b's. Second of all can you please stop writing in caps lock it's hurting my eyes well i mean if you want to stop writing in caps lock it's your decision just saying this chap kinda hurt my feelings.
11/19/2011 c1 Ye olde Canterlot Typin Style
TYPING IN ALL CAPSLOCK IS A REALLY BAD WAY TO WRITE A FANFICTION! IT CAN IMMEDIATELY TURN READERS AWAY, I KNOW IT TURNED ME AWAY!
9/26/2011 c1 Guest
most stop yelling person lode m-16 opens fire yeling take this troll
9/23/2011 c3 Rosewaver
The fact that you attempted to make your story sound good by twisting my own words around is hilarous. You fail as a writer, still.

I would say more, but that's about it.

~Rosewaver
9/23/2011 c3 6Ponydora Prancypants
I liked when Tails and that one horse accidentally the whole thing.
9/23/2011 c2 Ponydora Prancypants
Wait, is the purple horse SPIKE's girlfriend or the orange horse? I think you need to make clear which horse, because after reading this carefully twice, I'm still not sure.
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