for Kyon vs Asakura, Pokemon style!3/14/2012 c1 
12Dummy Perception
Hohoho.funny.. Kyon happened to be like a magicarp.."WTH"..hahaha i like it.
12Dummy PerceptionHohoho.funny.. Kyon happened to be like a magicarp.."WTH"..hahaha i like it.
10/9/2011 c1 1omniprotector012
Great parody!I totally lol'd at the part where KYON used WTH and STOOL ATTACK. And especially when YUKI evolved. Adding this to my favs. :)
1omniprotector012Great parody!I totally lol'd at the part where KYON used WTH and STOOL ATTACK. And especially when YUKI evolved. Adding this to my favs. :)
9/30/2011 c1 43Alex McM
I must be getting old because this brought back memories of my not too distant childhood. Still that was funny and clever too.
43Alex McMI must be getting old because this brought back memories of my not too distant childhood. Still that was funny and clever too.
9/24/2011 c1 KiyoshiXI
You forgot that the trainer had to recall Kyon in order to use Yuki. Otherwise, I liked it a lot. XD Nothing to complain about here.
You forgot that the trainer had to recall Kyon in order to use Yuki. Otherwise, I liked it a lot. XD Nothing to complain about here.
9/22/2011 c1 Brendan Rizzo
Heh. I loved this, especially the fact that neither Kyon's "WTF" nor Asakura's "Knife Slash" did anything. It's funny how if you translated this battle to RPG format, it involves a ton of misses and general stupidity.
Heh. I loved this, especially the fact that neither Kyon's "WTF" nor Asakura's "Knife Slash" did anything. It's funny how if you translated this battle to RPG format, it involves a ton of misses and general stupidity.
9/22/2011 c1 5FallenLegend
Laughed at every line involving Kyon's dumb luck. Which is to say a good 3/4 of the story.
Tiny nitpicky thing in that I think the move is mean look, where they cannot escape, but honestly nobody cares and I haven't played pokemon in a while either.
The ff.net community has used mean look! You are unable to escape this site now. Since you'll be here for a while, write more would you?
5FallenLegendLaughed at every line involving Kyon's dumb luck. Which is to say a good 3/4 of the story.
Tiny nitpicky thing in that I think the move is mean look, where they cannot escape, but honestly nobody cares and I haven't played pokemon in a while either.
The ff.net community has used mean look! You are unable to escape this site now. Since you'll be here for a while, write more would you?
9/20/2011 c1 Sara
LOL at the evolving and "Congratulations YUKI is now glassesless YUKI" xD fun story
LOL at the evolving and "Congratulations YUKI is now glassesless YUKI" xD fun story
9/19/2011 c1 3Andmeuths
Are you going to focus on writing humor? I think you will do very well in that!
3AndmeuthsAre you going to focus on writing humor? I think you will do very well in that!
9/19/2011 c1 Mugi-pyon
oh-my-god, this is what happened if you make a battle woth Pokemon style! your first try, and it's kind of funny, really!
LOL at this part:
But it missed! KYON used WTF!
It had no effect...
ASAKURA used NASTY PLOT!
ASAKURA's sp. atk rose sharply!
KYON used WTF!
It had no effect...
and this:
ASAKURA used KNIFE SLASH!
But it failed!
YUKI used PWN!
ASAKURA has fainted!
YUKI gains 15,000 EXP!
YUKI leveled up!
YUKI is evolving!
Congratulations, YUKI is now Glassessless YUKI!
LOL LOL LOL XDXDXD
oh-my-god, this is what happened if you make a battle woth Pokemon style! your first try, and it's kind of funny, really!
LOL at this part:
But it missed! KYON used WTF!
It had no effect...
ASAKURA used NASTY PLOT!
ASAKURA's sp. atk rose sharply!
KYON used WTF!
It had no effect...
and this:
ASAKURA used KNIFE SLASH!
But it failed!
YUKI used PWN!
ASAKURA has fainted!
YUKI gains 15,000 EXP!
YUKI leveled up!
YUKI is evolving!
Congratulations, YUKI is now Glassessless YUKI!
LOL LOL LOL XDXDXD
9/19/2011 c1 31superstarultra
Pretty darn funny attempt for a first fanfiction. I cracked up at several times. Mainly at the part where Yuki showed and got experience and when Ryoko's KNIFE SLASH ATTACK kept missing.
Hope to see you write some more soon! BTW...
YUKI is evolving!
Congratulations, YUKI is now Glassessless YUKI!
Pure LOL stuff right there.
31superstarultraPretty darn funny attempt for a first fanfiction. I cracked up at several times. Mainly at the part where Yuki showed and got experience and when Ryoko's KNIFE SLASH ATTACK kept missing.
Hope to see you write some more soon! BTW...
YUKI is evolving!
Congratulations, YUKI is now Glassessless YUKI!
Pure LOL stuff right there.
9/18/2011 c1 42Lyaksandra
Yeah, it's not a literary masterpiece, but it was quite funny to read. I chuckled at almost every other line, and they're all quite spot on, you're well versed in the pokemon universe.
42LyaksandraYeah, it's not a literary masterpiece, but it was quite funny to read. I chuckled at almost every other line, and they're all quite spot on, you're well versed in the pokemon universe.