for A Break in the Pattern5/15 c9 Carly Carnations
OMGOMGOMG you /have/ to update this! It's like, I'm gonna die if I don't see Harry (sorry - Harrison) the Twin of Dean Winchester story being continued! *Dramatic Pause* And Sam... Oh poor Sammy...
Please... :)
OMGOMGOMG you /have/ to update this! It's like, I'm gonna die if I don't see Harry (sorry - Harrison) the Twin of Dean Winchester story being continued! *Dramatic Pause* And Sam... Oh poor Sammy...
Please... :)
5/14 c9 l
great story, please continue
great story, please continue
4/13 c9 
19Shinigami-chan
Please update! I would love to see how Dean dam and Harry react during the first meeting!
19Shinigami-chanPlease update! I would love to see how Dean dam and Harry react during the first meeting!
4/9 c7 Awinarock
Another useless chapter, huh? I've never understood some authors's fascination with rewriting canon material word for word.
Another useless chapter, huh? I've never understood some authors's fascination with rewriting canon material word for word.
4/9 c5 Awinarock
Jesus Christ, enough with the Harrison crap. His name is Harry, not Harrison. Not once in Canon was he even referenced as Harrison. I know this is AU, but changing his name adds little to the story other than annoying your readers.
Jesus Christ, enough with the Harrison crap. His name is Harry, not Harrison. Not once in Canon was he even referenced as Harrison. I know this is AU, but changing his name adds little to the story other than annoying your readers.
4/9 c4 Awinarock
There is nothing more useless and boring than a Canon rewrite and you jus wrote an entire chapters worth of material that your readers can watch. What is the point of writing that?
There is nothing more useless and boring than a Canon rewrite and you jus wrote an entire chapters worth of material that your readers can watch. What is the point of writing that?
3/10 c9 3The One Who Is All
AWWWWWWWWW Please update! I do not want this story to be abandoned! It is really good! Please! I really like this version of Harry! I am amazed that Hermione is not grasping the whole situation. She is supposed to be the law abiding one and knows that child kidnapping is illegal. It will also be really fun to see how Dean and Harrison react to meeting each other.
3The One Who Is AllAWWWWWWWWW Please update! I do not want this story to be abandoned! It is really good! Please! I really like this version of Harry! I am amazed that Hermione is not grasping the whole situation. She is supposed to be the law abiding one and knows that child kidnapping is illegal. It will also be really fun to see how Dean and Harrison react to meeting each other.
3/8 c9 3Reading nerd
please update, i like your story, and i think you doing this chapter from Sam's point of view made it good, cause sometimes you need it from someone elses point of view, not just the twins
3Reading nerdplease update, i like your story, and i think you doing this chapter from Sam's point of view made it good, cause sometimes you need it from someone elses point of view, not just the twins
3/7 c9 Nenefee
Interesting concept; nicely written.
But it kind of drags. Over 30000 words and I still have the feeling that nothing really happened.
Interesting concept; nicely written.
But it kind of drags. Over 30000 words and I still have the feeling that nothing really happened.
3/7 c9 12Kitsune1818
I still don't like Harrison much, but the plot is another matter, that I really like and I'm hoping for an update soon. Read ya soon!
12Kitsune1818I still don't like Harrison much, but the plot is another matter, that I really like and I'm hoping for an update soon. Read ya soon!