for On the Way to Grandmother's House4/26 c1 Mlle Savage
Alors, ça fait un longtemps depuis j'ai regardé la dernière version et (bien sûr), t'es en train de corriger. C'est dommage mais c'est ma propre malchance ce qui est à la faute. :p
D'ailleurs, bon courage et j'ai hâte quand tu remets l'histoire bien corrigée.
Bisous mon amie :)
Alors, ça fait un longtemps depuis j'ai regardé la dernière version et (bien sûr), t'es en train de corriger. C'est dommage mais c'est ma propre malchance ce qui est à la faute. :p
D'ailleurs, bon courage et j'ai hâte quand tu remets l'histoire bien corrigée.
Bisous mon amie :)
3/24 c1 Celebrindal
PPPPPLLLLEEEEAAAASSSEEE update I absolutely totally love this story! and cannot wait!
PPPPPLLLLEEEEAAAASSSEEE update I absolutely totally love this story! and cannot wait!
3/24 c1 guest
Please update I love this story!
Please update I love this story!
3/5 c1 
6feyfollower
oh my gosh. I remember reading this story months ago, loving it then getting swamped with work & losing touch. And i've finally found it again, only its just the first tantilising chapter. Noooooooo...
I will wait, because i know it will be awesome, but i will be on edge waiting for updates.
6feyfolloweroh my gosh. I remember reading this story months ago, loving it then getting swamped with work & losing touch. And i've finally found it again, only its just the first tantilising chapter. Noooooooo...
I will wait, because i know it will be awesome, but i will be on edge waiting for updates.
1/18 c1 5Fyre Dancer
I realise its going to take a while to get this going again, but I'm ok with that. I think it will be worth the wait
5Fyre DancerI realise its going to take a while to get this going again, but I'm ok with that. I think it will be worth the wait
12/29/2012 c1 Ozarkmaid
I love this story! I have been eagerly reading each update, and I can't wait for you to get it back up. :) Please continue. :)
I love this story! I have been eagerly reading each update, and I can't wait for you to get it back up. :) Please continue. :)
12/12/2012 c34 Saloni
NEXT CHAPTER, PLEASE! I've been waiting for months :(
NEXT CHAPTER, PLEASE! I've been waiting for months :(
11/4/2012 c34 3Ilikemutemath
So amazing!
I'm seriously speechless.
This is by far the best chapter yet.
I cannot wait for the next chapter!
3IlikemutemathSo amazing!
I'm seriously speechless.
This is by far the best chapter yet.
I cannot wait for the next chapter!
11/3/2012 c34 2Pokemonchen
Well, sad touch to the story. But it must be done... No pain, no gain, right?
She should listen to Addin's side of this... he did tell her some things of his past. His side to this?
And she should do some investigating, like a detective would do. Innocent, till PROVEN guilty. No prove here! Unless I'm blind or something, there is no proof that he committed the crime. Gods, I sound like a lawyer for Addin O.o Which I guess is a good thing cause he's no baddie, unless I'm mistaken... but still, he is still INNOCENT!
Ok, I'll stop rambling now... good day
UPDATE
2PokemonchenWell, sad touch to the story. But it must be done... No pain, no gain, right?
She should listen to Addin's side of this... he did tell her some things of his past. His side to this?
And she should do some investigating, like a detective would do. Innocent, till PROVEN guilty. No prove here! Unless I'm blind or something, there is no proof that he committed the crime. Gods, I sound like a lawyer for Addin O.o Which I guess is a good thing cause he's no baddie, unless I'm mistaken... but still, he is still INNOCENT!
Ok, I'll stop rambling now... good day
UPDATE
11/3/2012 c34 Brimo
Amazing but a little short :( i was hoping for more juice from this chapter!
Anyway, update soon please!
Amazing but a little short :( i was hoping for more juice from this chapter!
Anyway, update soon please!
10/31/2012 c33 3Ilikemutemath
Wait, why do I feel like the apple is a bad thing?
This is a good chapter, it shows lots of confusion.
Update soon. I want to see what she does!
3IlikemutemathWait, why do I feel like the apple is a bad thing?
This is a good chapter, it shows lots of confusion.
Update soon. I want to see what she does!
10/28/2012 c33 Brimo
I love your story :) It is very captivating and it has completely stolen my attention! You write very genuinely... simple yet full of images and sounds. Beautiful work :D Please update asap!
I love your story :) It is very captivating and it has completely stolen my attention! You write very genuinely... simple yet full of images and sounds. Beautiful work :D Please update asap!
10/27/2012 c33 Kate
I love the last sentence, and hope you will update very, very soon.
I love the last sentence, and hope you will update very, very soon.