for The Lion, The Witch, and Xandir's Wardrobe4/6/2012 c1 
8KaidaThorn
This was the first, and only, "Drawn Together" fanfic I've read and I liked it very much.
It was a little confusing from time to time, and it might have been better if you separated each section in a different chapter, but that's besides what I thought about this.
This made me laugh, as loud as I could while trying to stay quiet. The characters were all wonderfully portrayed and they were surprisingly in character, which I thought somebody couldn't do as well as you did.
I'm curious about the title... It would've made more sense if it was a "Narnia" parody, but it works with the problems that are in this story...
I think you did a really good job on this, and I'm sad that it was so... actually, it wasn't that short... I'm sad that there aren't really any other fanfics, but I think that yours is good enough to hold up the "Drawn Together" community :D
8KaidaThornThis was the first, and only, "Drawn Together" fanfic I've read and I liked it very much.
It was a little confusing from time to time, and it might have been better if you separated each section in a different chapter, but that's besides what I thought about this.
This made me laugh, as loud as I could while trying to stay quiet. The characters were all wonderfully portrayed and they were surprisingly in character, which I thought somebody couldn't do as well as you did.
I'm curious about the title... It would've made more sense if it was a "Narnia" parody, but it works with the problems that are in this story...
I think you did a really good job on this, and I'm sad that it was so... actually, it wasn't that short... I'm sad that there aren't really any other fanfics, but I think that yours is good enough to hold up the "Drawn Together" community :D