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9animagirl
When is kiba going to claim Faery as his mate. Also I think there should be a point in the story where Tsume has a bit of a protective side with Faery. Their personalities are also alike so maybe he could see her as a sister that might get kiba a bit jealous and possessive. The plot is moving like the anime but have a little more about their bonds as a pack.
Awesome hob Faery is awesome plz continue updating.
9animagirlWhen is kiba going to claim Faery as his mate. Also I think there should be a point in the story where Tsume has a bit of a protective side with Faery. Their personalities are also alike so maybe he could see her as a sister that might get kiba a bit jealous and possessive. The plot is moving like the anime but have a little more about their bonds as a pack.
Awesome hob Faery is awesome plz continue updating.
9/25/2012 c7 Plucie
I really like it! Keep up the good work, and I will definitely keep reading! I like how you put Feray in the story without really changing it, but still manage to keep it interesting, even though you already know what's going to happen. What really bothered me in other fics, is that they just split Kiba's moments into Kiba's and their OC's, not really adding anything, and making Kiba less awesome than he is, but fortunately that's not the case in your story. Haha, if you continue like you're going now, I think it will turn out great! Anyways, what I really just wanted to say is: Thanks for the good fic, and please keep posting!
I really like it! Keep up the good work, and I will definitely keep reading! I like how you put Feray in the story without really changing it, but still manage to keep it interesting, even though you already know what's going to happen. What really bothered me in other fics, is that they just split Kiba's moments into Kiba's and their OC's, not really adding anything, and making Kiba less awesome than he is, but fortunately that's not the case in your story. Haha, if you continue like you're going now, I think it will turn out great! Anyways, what I really just wanted to say is: Thanks for the good fic, and please keep posting!
7/14/2012 c6 3BlueWillow29
Yay! I was so excited to see that you updated!
Feray's 'episode' in this chapter kinda frightened me. And I was honestly surprised that she didn't apologize to Toboe.
I think you have done a splendid job on the interactions between Kiba and Feray.
Can't wait to read more and see what happens next.
-Keggy
3BlueWillow29Yay! I was so excited to see that you updated!
Feray's 'episode' in this chapter kinda frightened me. And I was honestly surprised that she didn't apologize to Toboe.
I think you have done a splendid job on the interactions between Kiba and Feray.
Can't wait to read more and see what happens next.
-Keggy
6/15/2012 c5 1MaxFangIggyNudgeGazzyAngel
I love the story. I think that this is well thought out and I can't wait to read more. I hope that you do continue. Keep writing! :)
1MaxFangIggyNudgeGazzyAngelI love the story. I think that this is well thought out and I can't wait to read more. I hope that you do continue. Keep writing! :)
3/13/2012 c5 3BlueWillow29
This story is amazing! Keep it up! You are doing great with how you portray the characters. I really do love Feray. She is so interesting and a well-rounded character.
I really hope you finish this story! Again, it is a great read.
3BlueWillow29This story is amazing! Keep it up! You are doing great with how you portray the characters. I really do love Feray. She is so interesting and a well-rounded character.
I really hope you finish this story! Again, it is a great read.
2/2/2012 c5 4Alysaya
I hope you continue to work on this story. Feray is quite a likable character. I congratulate your hard work.
4AlysayaI hope you continue to work on this story. Feray is quite a likable character. I congratulate your hard work.
9/30/2011 c5 9MorWolfMor
This is good :) it's interesting to find out her history now..hm.
Can't wait for the next update :D
9MorWolfMorThis is good :) it's interesting to find out her history now..hm.
Can't wait for the next update :D
9/23/2011 c4 MorWolfMor
I really like this story. :) great job ^0^ and yes, while Cher is kinda out of character, I think you made it work nicely. :) I can't wait to see what happens next
I really like this story. :) great job ^0^ and yes, while Cher is kinda out of character, I think you made it work nicely. :) I can't wait to see what happens next
9/22/2011 c4 10Juliedoo
This is interesting, and I've enjoyed what I've read so far. I'll be watching for your next update, and good job! ^_^
10JuliedooThis is interesting, and I've enjoyed what I've read so far. I'll be watching for your next update, and good job! ^_^
9/22/2011 c4 Tallulahthewildgirl
cant wait till the next chapter . PM me when the next chapter is out, Tallulah
cant wait till the next chapter . PM me when the next chapter is out, Tallulah