for A Million Little Pieces8/26/2012 c21 
8poeticjustice13
I actually love this ending. It's a great end to a strong. I like how things worked out in the end. This was a good read and even though it took me forever to review and read on time, I was glad I got through it. I can't wait for your new story idea and I hope you have fun in high school. Plus, a small break is always good for the creative mind. :)
8poeticjustice13I actually love this ending. It's a great end to a strong. I like how things worked out in the end. This was a good read and even though it took me forever to review and read on time, I was glad I got through it. I can't wait for your new story idea and I hope you have fun in high school. Plus, a small break is always good for the creative mind. :)
8/21/2012 c21 Alecks454
Great story! Great ending. Cami and Logan may not date but they have each other as great and that's just as good! :)
Great story! Great ending. Cami and Logan may not date but they have each other as great and that's just as good! :)
8/19/2012 c20 8poeticjustice13
Okay, this review is beyond late so bear with me on this one, please.
I'm jumping for joy at the fact that Mom finally gets kicked off her high horse. And by dad? That just makes it so much more bad ass! I'm happy that the divorce is there and that Logan can finally breathe. It gives the readers the satisfaction of a happy ending.
I can't wait for the next chapter. I'm sad to see this story go but the journey was worth it.
8poeticjustice13Okay, this review is beyond late so bear with me on this one, please.
I'm jumping for joy at the fact that Mom finally gets kicked off her high horse. And by dad? That just makes it so much more bad ass! I'm happy that the divorce is there and that Logan can finally breathe. It gives the readers the satisfaction of a happy ending.
I can't wait for the next chapter. I'm sad to see this story go but the journey was worth it.
8/2/2012 c20 20chocolate-colombo
Well I wanna say that this chapter was sweet...but Joanna cheated on her husband so...that's not sweet.
But the Mitchell kids are now with their daddy! Yay!
Loved it :D
20chocolate-colomboWell I wanna say that this chapter was sweet...but Joanna cheated on her husband so...that's not sweet.
But the Mitchell kids are now with their daddy! Yay!
Loved it :D
8/2/2012 c20 Guest
Great chapter! Is the last chapter going to talk about Camille and Logan?
Great chapter! Is the last chapter going to talk about Camille and Logan?
8/2/2012 c20 5fanficchica123
I really loved this chapter because it finally made Joanna leave and made Logan and Racheal's lives happy. Very good and hope to see the next two chapters up soon :)
5fanficchica123I really loved this chapter because it finally made Joanna leave and made Logan and Racheal's lives happy. Very good and hope to see the next two chapters up soon :)
7/17/2012 c19 4Gifted Shadows
SHOUT OUT! WHOOP WHOOP!:D
Awa. Poor Logie. DON'T WORRY! HAVE FAITH IN THE HAPPY GIRL!
HIS DAD? I was ri-ight. I was ri-ight!*sings*
I liked this chappie! Good for Rachel. She's smarticle.
I don't think you should end this in one chapter 'cause that might be a little rushed, unless you make one mega huge chapter. I'm not sure. Do your magic!:D
4Gifted ShadowsSHOUT OUT! WHOOP WHOOP!:D
Awa. Poor Logie. DON'T WORRY! HAVE FAITH IN THE HAPPY GIRL!
HIS DAD? I was ri-ight. I was ri-ight!*sings*
I liked this chappie! Good for Rachel. She's smarticle.
I don't think you should end this in one chapter 'cause that might be a little rushed, unless you make one mega huge chapter. I'm not sure. Do your magic!:D
7/16/2012 c19 20chocolate-colombo
Yay! Rachel made Logan stay! That's a...bittersweet thing.
And wow O_O his dad's come back? You're just pulling out all the surprises in your stories, aren't ya?
That's cool XD Sweet chapter :)
20chocolate-colomboYay! Rachel made Logan stay! That's a...bittersweet thing.
And wow O_O his dad's come back? You're just pulling out all the surprises in your stories, aren't ya?
That's cool XD Sweet chapter :)