for Meet the Pyro9/3/2012 c7 
3KrnYong
Pyro is a bawss! Lol, he really is unnerving, though. Cold, mysterious, and definitely unnerving...
3KrnYongPyro is a bawss! Lol, he really is unnerving, though. Cold, mysterious, and definitely unnerving...
8/10/2012 c7 19Lordriochi
I see that the BLU team was the victims of an ambush from behind. I imagine that the explosions came from the Engineer's buildings and the Demoman's failed attempt to kill the Pyro before it was too late.
19LordriochiI see that the BLU team was the victims of an ambush from behind. I imagine that the explosions came from the Engineer's buildings and the Demoman's failed attempt to kill the Pyro before it was too late.
4/6/2012 c7 2thedogdelusion
I like your writing style. The characterization was good, as was the pacing. I enjoyed the little details you added (my favorite was Heavy's "sausage-sized thumb"), they really added to the flavor of the story.
2thedogdelusionI like your writing style. The characterization was good, as was the pacing. I enjoyed the little details you added (my favorite was Heavy's "sausage-sized thumb"), they really added to the flavor of the story.
1/30/2012 c7 22KingdomOfThomond
The last bit was really good. If Demo was there, I guess he would have said "Kablooie!".
22KingdomOfThomondThe last bit was really good. If Demo was there, I guess he would have said "Kablooie!".
11/12/2011 c7 1SunLord89
This is aweosme, the pyro is always fun story material. I'm looking forward to an update
1SunLord89This is aweosme, the pyro is always fun story material. I'm looking forward to an update
11/9/2011 c7 Alaric
1 Word: AWSOME
1 Word: AWSOME
11/7/2011 c7 18mumbling mice
This was very cute and clever. I enjoyed it.
Good characterization and well-paced plot. I only wish you had chosen to expand it.
18mumbling miceThis was very cute and clever. I enjoyed it.
Good characterization and well-paced plot. I only wish you had chosen to expand it.
10/20/2011 c4 10Invader Kiwi
Brill. I. Ant. When I realized I'd reached the end of the four chapters, I was literally heartbroken. PLEASE update soon!
10Invader KiwiBrill. I. Ant. When I realized I'd reached the end of the four chapters, I was literally heartbroken. PLEASE update soon!
10/18/2011 c4 3conchshellthegeek7
A well-written story, if a bit generic. Still, I'm looking forward to seeing how it turns out.
3conchshellthegeek7A well-written story, if a bit generic. Still, I'm looking forward to seeing how it turns out.