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1yukina-kun
Wow...just wow. So sad and angsty but beautiful at the same time, Fantastic Job! Now please excuse me while I dry my pillow only cry into it again...
1yukina-kunWow...just wow. So sad and angsty but beautiful at the same time, Fantastic Job! Now please excuse me while I dry my pillow only cry into it again...
10/19/2011 c1
20lovesreidforever
So incredibly sad yet so wonderfully written great job. Even if I did bawl my eyes out reading it.
20lovesreidforeverSo incredibly sad yet so wonderfully written great job. Even if I did bawl my eyes out reading it.
9/28/2011 c1
183Daisyangel
I don't know how anyone could ever bad mouth this story. Yes it's sad, and yes it made me cry, but it's very well written.
183DaisyangelI don't know how anyone could ever bad mouth this story. Yes it's sad, and yes it made me cry, but it's very well written.
9/27/2011 c1 Annette
I've been reading fanfic for a long while and I want to say 'well done', it takes a lot to get me to cry. Spot on emotions that hits the heart. Great writing skills shown...please keep up the good work.
I've been reading fanfic for a long while and I want to say 'well done', it takes a lot to get me to cry. Spot on emotions that hits the heart. Great writing skills shown...please keep up the good work.
9/27/2011 c1
15Leavinghome
Yay, first review! That's because I review every single story I read. I hate when people don't review or only write like one word. But that's beside the point.
Aaaanyway, I have to say that I think the idea of Reid having cancer is slightly odd. Because wouldn't we have seen that on the scan in "Corazon"? But still, I don't think the cause of death is really important to the story. You have captured the characters and their relationship very accurately, especially for JJ, Garcia and Rossi. For example, how Hotch says one sentence at the gravestone, earnest and meaningful, while Garcia tells a whole story and says so wonderfully random things.
You're writing is beautiful and shows the emotions perfectly. Maybe I'm just a little cry-baby, but I confess I shed a few tears over this. Well done!
Leavinghome
Oh, and one more thing. You should put something like "possible character death" somewhere in the description, because some people don't like it and I don't want you to get hate mail over this sweet little tragedy.
15LeavinghomeYay, first review! That's because I review every single story I read. I hate when people don't review or only write like one word. But that's beside the point.
Aaaanyway, I have to say that I think the idea of Reid having cancer is slightly odd. Because wouldn't we have seen that on the scan in "Corazon"? But still, I don't think the cause of death is really important to the story. You have captured the characters and their relationship very accurately, especially for JJ, Garcia and Rossi. For example, how Hotch says one sentence at the gravestone, earnest and meaningful, while Garcia tells a whole story and says so wonderfully random things.
You're writing is beautiful and shows the emotions perfectly. Maybe I'm just a little cry-baby, but I confess I shed a few tears over this. Well done!
Leavinghome
Oh, and one more thing. You should put something like "possible character death" somewhere in the description, because some people don't like it and I don't want you to get hate mail over this sweet little tragedy.
