for On The Night Train9/30/2011 c1 Nicster
I am absolutely loving these stories they are NOT repetitive , they're brilliant! I think it's clever that you are moving the story along but using a different person's POV each time, I'd love to read more, maybe one from Paddy and even Cain!
It was so funny how they came into the shop one by one each of them making it so much harder for Aaron. You know all of their characters so well, I can imagine it playing out on screen.
Aaron's thoughts were all so believable too especially trying to kid himself that he only "likes" thinks about Jackson rather than "loving" and trying to convince himself he'd be happier living a normal 'straight' life but knowing that really he'd rather have Jackson.
Thank you so much for writing these, I really enjoy them abs would love to read more
I am absolutely loving these stories they are NOT repetitive , they're brilliant! I think it's clever that you are moving the story along but using a different person's POV each time, I'd love to read more, maybe one from Paddy and even Cain!
It was so funny how they came into the shop one by one each of them making it so much harder for Aaron. You know all of their characters so well, I can imagine it playing out on screen.
Aaron's thoughts were all so believable too especially trying to kid himself that he only "likes" thinks about Jackson rather than "loving" and trying to convince himself he'd be happier living a normal 'straight' life but knowing that really he'd rather have Jackson.
Thank you so much for writing these, I really enjoy them abs would love to read more
9/29/2011 c1 Shawnyola
Awww, thank you for writing this for me, I loved it! :-) It was great to have a story told from Aaron's point of view, describing his feelings and his awkwardness in the shop was so sweet. I don't think you're repeating yourself, you've told a different view point of a story which has moved on since the last. Love your one shots xx.
Awww, thank you for writing this for me, I loved it! :-) It was great to have a story told from Aaron's point of view, describing his feelings and his awkwardness in the shop was so sweet. I don't think you're repeating yourself, you've told a different view point of a story which has moved on since the last. Love your one shots xx.
9/29/2011 c1 Chicky Babes
Wonderful story and once again Aaron is just so Aaron in this (top class writing - well done)
Wonderful story and once again Aaron is just so Aaron in this (top class writing - well done)
9/29/2011 c1 CazB
Definitely not stuck on repeat.
Brilliant chapter from start to finish.
Loved it as always.
Definitely not stuck on repeat.
Brilliant chapter from start to finish.
Loved it as always.
9/29/2011 c1 mcll123
Poor Aaron the embarassment of it all, all he wanted was to buy a pizza. You really convey how suffocating the situation is for him. Fantastic read as always and it certainly isn't stuck on repeat.
Poor Aaron the embarassment of it all, all he wanted was to buy a pizza. You really convey how suffocating the situation is for him. Fantastic read as always and it certainly isn't stuck on repeat.
9/29/2011 c1 Nat
Another great snippet from their life!
The writing is fantastic definitely not stuck on repeat. I love seeing that you have written another story about them, cheers up my day! :)
Another great snippet from their life!
The writing is fantastic definitely not stuck on repeat. I love seeing that you have written another story about them, cheers up my day! :)
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