for Doofy the Wereplatypus11/9/2011 c9 Ashleigh Piccinino
They need to start eating healthier like apples and stuff. They've got sugar, but the natural kind, not that kind that rots teeth. Oh well, please start them on that; you don't want any diseases running amuck do you? Need to think about these things, even in a fanfic I do believe.
They need to start eating healthier like apples and stuff. They've got sugar, but the natural kind, not that kind that rots teeth. Oh well, please start them on that; you don't want any diseases running amuck do you? Need to think about these things, even in a fanfic I do believe.
11/9/2011 c8 Ashleigh Piccinino
Well I guess colds are going around and around huh? I wonder if those people can get flu shots like humans? Can you put that in?
Well I guess colds are going around and around huh? I wonder if those people can get flu shots like humans? Can you put that in?
11/9/2011 c7 Ashleigh Piccinino
Don't do anything you evil man! That's the thing, I'm surprised he's not being his normal self, all vilainous and all. What changed? Maybe he could stay like this forever. I but that's the first wereplat they've had at the agency huh?
Don't do anything you evil man! That's the thing, I'm surprised he's not being his normal self, all vilainous and all. What changed? Maybe he could stay like this forever. I but that's the first wereplat they've had at the agency huh?
11/9/2011 c6 Ashleigh Piccinino
You cannot make her be homeless, but I bet you could have her work or something to pay wrent or something like that; they're probably not going to have free room and board for her, at least not these days; she'll have to work for it.
You cannot make her be homeless, but I bet you could have her work or something to pay wrent or something like that; they're probably not going to have free room and board for her, at least not these days; she'll have to work for it.
11/9/2011 c5 Ashleigh Piccinino
That means that Pery needs to be bitten, so there can be a whole flock or whatever of those things. Yea!
That means that Pery needs to be bitten, so there can be a whole flock or whatever of those things. Yea!
11/9/2011 c4 Ashleigh Piccinino
Please ... don't ... start ... shrekking ... him Al; not cool for a fanfic! By the word shrekking or any other form of that word, I mean having sex with.
Please ... don't ... start ... shrekking ... him Al; not cool for a fanfic! By the word shrekking or any other form of that word, I mean having sex with.
11/9/2011 c3 Ashleigh Piccinino
Shouldn't that stuff only occur on the full moon and not any other time? Why didn't he turn back? Oh maybe I know why. Just like an Animagus, if you stay in one form for a long time, the animal traits replace the human ones over time; however, it's happening way too fast.
Shouldn't that stuff only occur on the full moon and not any other time? Why didn't he turn back? Oh maybe I know why. Just like an Animagus, if you stay in one form for a long time, the animal traits replace the human ones over time; however, it's happening way too fast.
11/9/2011 c1 Ashleigh Piccinino
I liked this chapter. I was going to read it on Halloween but didn't get the chance. Keep updating
I liked this chapter. I was going to read it on Halloween but didn't get the chance. Keep updating
10/2/2011 c1 RandomBob
this is a good story idea, but i think it could use a bit more work.
this is a good story idea, but i think it could use a bit more work.
39/29/2011 c2 BrookeDoofy
Hello Hello Hello!
Awesome story! I like how childlike Heinz is, The turning platypus thing makes people act childlike a lot.. And that's awesome!
Alt. Doof: I don't wanna see this girl on sugar... Ever... She's already hyper enough...
Me: I KNOW WHAT I'M GONNA BE FOR HALLOWEEN! A WEREPLATYPUS!
A. Doof: Your human and can't turn Platypus how will that work?
Me: I don't know!
Platyborg: I could be a wereplatypus
Rodney: I'm still being a homeless man!
Me: Rodney... Please leave before I make a journal about this...
Rodney: Fine
Hello Hello Hello!
Awesome story! I like how childlike Heinz is, The turning platypus thing makes people act childlike a lot.. And that's awesome!
Alt. Doof: I don't wanna see this girl on sugar... Ever... She's already hyper enough...
Me: I KNOW WHAT I'M GONNA BE FOR HALLOWEEN! A WEREPLATYPUS!
A. Doof: Your human and can't turn Platypus how will that work?
Me: I don't know!
Platyborg: I could be a wereplatypus
Rodney: I'm still being a homeless man!
Me: Rodney... Please leave before I make a journal about this...
Rodney: Fine