for Someone To Lean On9/30/2011 c1 
17RawkHawk2.0
This may be for the crack pairing contest, but I find myself thinking this to be fairly realistic.
Eirika is very well portrayed, and for such a short story, you explore her character a great deal. Her emotions are all excellently shown to us, and it never feels out of character.
Vanessa is similarly well portrayed. The caring respect she has for Eirika is written into it perfectly, and I think that is a great accomplishment in itself.
I know it's technically crack, but you write this in such a way that it feels like it could have actually happened. Very well done.
Best Regards,
RawkHawk2.0
17RawkHawk2.0This may be for the crack pairing contest, but I find myself thinking this to be fairly realistic.
Eirika is very well portrayed, and for such a short story, you explore her character a great deal. Her emotions are all excellently shown to us, and it never feels out of character.
Vanessa is similarly well portrayed. The caring respect she has for Eirika is written into it perfectly, and I think that is a great accomplishment in itself.
I know it's technically crack, but you write this in such a way that it feels like it could have actually happened. Very well done.
Best Regards,
RawkHawk2.0