for You Belong to us12/4/2012 c16 Erin
Please update! :)
Please update! :)
5/13/2012 c1 
1Lovely7896
This story is like the smartest mix ever! Vampire diaries and Twilight! Nice story so far! Keep going your great!
1Lovely7896This story is like the smartest mix ever! Vampire diaries and Twilight! Nice story so far! Keep going your great!
10/29/2011 c5 LILY
You suck. The worst fanfic ever. The storyline was crappy. And don't get me started on grammar. CAPITAL LETTERS! RING A BELL? The dialogue... UGH awful!
You suck. The worst fanfic ever. The storyline was crappy. And don't get me started on grammar. CAPITAL LETTERS! RING A BELL? The dialogue... UGH awful!
10/13/2011 c5 16the dark euphie
It's not a bad plot actually, I just think you've gotten a little carried away. Your grammar needs severe work, as does your wording, please get a beta. The mental communication would be good between Elena and whichever original vampire, I consider vampires like Elijah, Klaus, Damon, and Stefan to be the original vampire species, so many powers than the ones in Twilight, that she winds up with. Preferably Klaus and Elijah, that combo would be deadly. Oh and just wait till the Volturi enter the mix.
16the dark euphieIt's not a bad plot actually, I just think you've gotten a little carried away. Your grammar needs severe work, as does your wording, please get a beta. The mental communication would be good between Elena and whichever original vampire, I consider vampires like Elijah, Klaus, Damon, and Stefan to be the original vampire species, so many powers than the ones in Twilight, that she winds up with. Preferably Klaus and Elijah, that combo would be deadly. Oh and just wait till the Volturi enter the mix.
10/7/2011 c13 13Dark Alana
I **ing hate these vampires. I like Katherine and Caroline in this story, but everyone else is just annoying and **ward is a **. Please I beg of you, whoever you pair Elena with please let him be a man and not so **. UPDATE REALLY SOON! =]
13Dark AlanaI **ing hate these vampires. I like Katherine and Caroline in this story, but everyone else is just annoying and **ward is a **. Please I beg of you, whoever you pair Elena with please let him be a man and not so **. UPDATE REALLY SOON! =]
10/1/2011 c5 Dark Alana
I like the new chapter. A little short. I hope Elena ends us with Jasper. But I have to be honest when I was about to read this story I was a little apprehensive. The title sounded controlling and Elena isn't one to be controlled and I doubt she would let anyone do that to her., I just hope you don't make her into someone like that. I hate that! UPDATE REALLY SOON!
I like the new chapter. A little short. I hope Elena ends us with Jasper. But I have to be honest when I was about to read this story I was a little apprehensive. The title sounded controlling and Elena isn't one to be controlled and I doubt she would let anyone do that to her., I just hope you don't make her into someone like that. I hate that! UPDATE REALLY SOON!
9/30/2011 c2 VanillaTwilight5896
I think you should make this an ElenaxEdward story.
UPDATE SOON XD
I think you should make this an ElenaxEdward story.
UPDATE SOON XD