for Insomnia6/3/2012 c1 ProngstheMarauder15
hello. I know this hasn't been worked on in a while, but I still decided to add a review. This fanfiction is amazing. The way you write makes the reader really think that they are in the story. You use plenty of descriptive words, and you allow us a look inside what the reader is thinking. Please keep writing this story, because I'm going to keep reading and reviewing!
hello. I know this hasn't been worked on in a while, but I still decided to add a review. This fanfiction is amazing. The way you write makes the reader really think that they are in the story. You use plenty of descriptive words, and you allow us a look inside what the reader is thinking. Please keep writing this story, because I'm going to keep reading and reviewing!
10/2/2011 c1 
11Hippothestrowl
Excellent. Very well written. Emotional. This could be part of a bigger story (in a way, it is) but it is also complete in itself. Thanks for this.
11HippothestrowlExcellent. Very well written. Emotional. This could be part of a bigger story (in a way, it is) but it is also complete in itself. Thanks for this.
10/1/2011 c1 2thefanfictiongirl
Ok as an author that writes about the seventh year from neville,ginny and luna's point of view i find it very difficult to portrait luna's side of the story (maybe you could read my hp story too? and tell me what you think?) but your story is truly amazing, i made it one of my favorite ones as it got me emotional!
the way you present luna is truly spectacular, her thoughts about dark and light and the way she remembers her mom and the way you portrait her growing up and not caring about dark any more because she has problems far worse than that blew me away.
i especially liked the fact that she found darkness comforting, it really made sense and it seemed natural, since she needs a way out of this world of pain and terror,
never be afraid to fly i'll be there to catch you..
that got me teary, her relationship with her mother is really touching and luna wanting to do the same for her friends, is so luna!
her not caring for her birthday shows the isolation,worriness and the effect of this new world to her life and thoughs, things that seem important to everyone else, seem to not matter for her and she even forgets about them, this is for me a parallel between this scene and the scene with harry and hermione at the graveyard when it's christmas and they don't really care,they feel so vulnarable,so isolated that they just say a merry christmas hermione,merry christmas harry and they pass the event as it never happened.
for the end i adored the way you presented luna's own form of rebellion, it was really adorable to see her wanting the school united towards the common enemy and the fact that she considered dumbledore's army as part of what's hogwarts as dumbledore was always part of what's hogwarts
it was really an emotional ending and it got me tears in my eyes
i have no idea why this story doesn't already have like 200 reviews since it's one of the best ones i've ever read
i have no idea how i am gonna present luna's thoughts and emotions since reading your story made me realize that i have to write something particularly great to be able to top this off and even if not top this off,be as good as this.
you made my job really difficult and i wanna thank you for that!
If i ever writted luna's side of the story(which i will eventually do) i would want it to be this way, this is truly mind blowing!
hope you like my story too
2thefanfictiongirlOk as an author that writes about the seventh year from neville,ginny and luna's point of view i find it very difficult to portrait luna's side of the story (maybe you could read my hp story too? and tell me what you think?) but your story is truly amazing, i made it one of my favorite ones as it got me emotional!
the way you present luna is truly spectacular, her thoughts about dark and light and the way she remembers her mom and the way you portrait her growing up and not caring about dark any more because she has problems far worse than that blew me away.
i especially liked the fact that she found darkness comforting, it really made sense and it seemed natural, since she needs a way out of this world of pain and terror,
never be afraid to fly i'll be there to catch you..
that got me teary, her relationship with her mother is really touching and luna wanting to do the same for her friends, is so luna!
her not caring for her birthday shows the isolation,worriness and the effect of this new world to her life and thoughs, things that seem important to everyone else, seem to not matter for her and she even forgets about them, this is for me a parallel between this scene and the scene with harry and hermione at the graveyard when it's christmas and they don't really care,they feel so vulnarable,so isolated that they just say a merry christmas hermione,merry christmas harry and they pass the event as it never happened.
for the end i adored the way you presented luna's own form of rebellion, it was really adorable to see her wanting the school united towards the common enemy and the fact that she considered dumbledore's army as part of what's hogwarts as dumbledore was always part of what's hogwarts
it was really an emotional ending and it got me tears in my eyes
i have no idea why this story doesn't already have like 200 reviews since it's one of the best ones i've ever read
i have no idea how i am gonna present luna's thoughts and emotions since reading your story made me realize that i have to write something particularly great to be able to top this off and even if not top this off,be as good as this.
you made my job really difficult and i wanna thank you for that!
If i ever writted luna's side of the story(which i will eventually do) i would want it to be this way, this is truly mind blowing!
hope you like my story too