for Boredom with the Shinsencumi9/7/2012 c1 
2Free of Mundane Thoughts
Pffhahahahahaha what is this. This is fabulous. Though I feel a little bad that Saito was left out, and that Heisuke was kinda pushed out of the way. xD Poor guy. He could've gotten her mouth, y'know... But lols. Poor Kondou, too, for walking in on that. I wonder what happens the next morning... oO;; xD Thanks for writing!
2Free of Mundane ThoughtsPffhahahahahaha what is this. This is fabulous. Though I feel a little bad that Saito was left out, and that Heisuke was kinda pushed out of the way. xD Poor guy. He could've gotten her mouth, y'know... But lols. Poor Kondou, too, for walking in on that. I wonder what happens the next morning... oO;; xD Thanks for writing!
9/7/2012 c1 Poodle
..Saitou-kun ;( But this is very good :)
..Saitou-kun ;( But this is very good :)
7/22/2012 c1 BriarRose
This. was. omg. i loved it. but you forgot my favorite character! Saito! its ok though plenty of steam and there was no room for him :C please write another story!
This. was. omg. i loved it. but you forgot my favorite character! Saito! its ok though plenty of steam and there was no room for him :C please write another story!
7/22/2012 c1 Guest
Quite interesting. I was hoping Saitou would join in too. He he he. /
Great story.
Quite interesting. I was hoping Saitou would join in too. He he he. /
Great story.
7/11/2012 c1 1SaphireVienna
OMG I LOVED ET! LOVED ET!...you need to make another one with Sannan-San! He needs to have a little fun too. Poor guy is all work and no play, y'know? lol Anyway, I absolutely adored this story, but I felt bad for Heisuke...it didn't seem like he really got any lol. And he's so cute too!
1SaphireViennaOMG I LOVED ET! LOVED ET!...you need to make another one with Sannan-San! He needs to have a little fun too. Poor guy is all work and no play, y'know? lol Anyway, I absolutely adored this story, but I felt bad for Heisuke...it didn't seem like he really got any lol. And he's so cute too!
7/11/2012 c1 34Kurai Minoru
To be quite frank with you, I didn't really care much for the smut in the story. But the ending... PURE GENIUS. Ohmigosh I laughed so hard when Kondou said he needed the sword to cut his eyes out. In the middle of the night when everyone was sleeping might I add. Well done.
-KuraiMinoru XxX The Dark Truth XxX
34Kurai MinoruTo be quite frank with you, I didn't really care much for the smut in the story. But the ending... PURE GENIUS. Ohmigosh I laughed so hard when Kondou said he needed the sword to cut his eyes out. In the middle of the night when everyone was sleeping might I add. Well done.
-KuraiMinoru XxX The Dark Truth XxX
7/2/2012 c1 Guest
Omg... It takes a special type of person to write something like that... And I'm glad to have found you
Omg... It takes a special type of person to write something like that... And I'm glad to have found you
4/20/2012 c1 Randomstranger
8DD This was great XDD
Though it would have been fun if Yamazaki and Saito were here oAo;;
It be a complete harem also if Chikage Kazama was here, unfortunately he's a full oni so he's an enemy. :)) Overall your writing was good, concise and clear. I can also imagine the scene with your words which is good :DD
I hope to read more of lemon works from you.
This is 3 ^^/
8DD This was great XDD
Though it would have been fun if Yamazaki and Saito were here oAo;;
It be a complete harem also if Chikage Kazama was here, unfortunately he's a full oni so he's an enemy. :)) Overall your writing was good, concise and clear. I can also imagine the scene with your words which is good :DD
I hope to read more of lemon works from you.
This is 3 ^^/
12/17/2011 c1 www.L.O.V.E.com
Aww, where's Saitou? I really wanna see him loose control too haha! Bwahaha, the ending made me laughed crazily!:) great fic!~Nya~
Aww, where's Saitou? I really wanna see him loose control too haha! Bwahaha, the ending made me laughed crazily!:) great fic!~Nya~
11/16/2011 c1 Sharon21
Nicely done and well written! Too bad Saito wasnt in it :(
Nicely done and well written! Too bad Saito wasnt in it :(
11/15/2011 c1 Sharon21
Nicely done and well written! Too bad Saito wasnt in it :(
Nicely done and well written! Too bad Saito wasnt in it :(
10/2/2011 c1 Anon
Overall I would say that was very well written, somewhat canon and if I say so myself, pretty hot. The fact that its short really adds to the sexual tension. the only criticism I have would be with the use of a few sexual word, or naming of parts of the anatomy. while saying "wo/manhood" sounds nice at parts it sounds a little formal, I fully respect that it is your style just be careful not to break the tension that is so well set. but don't let that get in the way of the fact it was amazing, real good job ;) 8.5/10
Overall I would say that was very well written, somewhat canon and if I say so myself, pretty hot. The fact that its short really adds to the sexual tension. the only criticism I have would be with the use of a few sexual word, or naming of parts of the anatomy. while saying "wo/manhood" sounds nice at parts it sounds a little formal, I fully respect that it is your style just be careful not to break the tension that is so well set. but don't let that get in the way of the fact it was amazing, real good job ;) 8.5/10