for The Comeback of the voices of Henry VIII11/3/2011 c1 
198Marina Ka-Fai
I like this version of Catherine's appearance to Henry. Glad to see he is finally taught a lesson
198Marina Ka-FaiI like this version of Catherine's appearance to Henry. Glad to see he is finally taught a lesson
10/27/2011 c1 4Claire Hayasaka
I had to laugh when I read, "Margaret left, leaving Henry confused"
It just made me imagine Henry with this sad confused look on his face like, "What...just...happened?"
Okay, sorry for my random thought there! I loved the emotion in this, very very much! It was nice to see Margaret Beaufort, and Katherine too! :D They sure let him have it huh? Spiritual...therapy? :P
You seem to capitalize words randomly in the middle of sentences that don't need to be, just wanted to let you know! You write so good for English not being your first language...(Seriously, if I tried to write a whole story like you did in another language, I'd just embarrass myself lol) Keep it up! :D
4Claire HayasakaI had to laugh when I read, "Margaret left, leaving Henry confused"
It just made me imagine Henry with this sad confused look on his face like, "What...just...happened?"
Okay, sorry for my random thought there! I loved the emotion in this, very very much! It was nice to see Margaret Beaufort, and Katherine too! :D They sure let him have it huh? Spiritual...therapy? :P
You seem to capitalize words randomly in the middle of sentences that don't need to be, just wanted to let you know! You write so good for English not being your first language...(Seriously, if I tried to write a whole story like you did in another language, I'd just embarrass myself lol) Keep it up! :D
10/2/2011 c1 Cathy Earnshaw
Though the story is well written and I enjoyed reading it, I don't think Margaret Beaufort would have called Anne Boleyn a ** but I guess that everyone is entitled to share its views.
Though the story is well written and I enjoyed reading it, I don't think Margaret Beaufort would have called Anne Boleyn a ** but I guess that everyone is entitled to share its views.
10/2/2011 c1 17Velocitygirl1980
Awww Poor Henry, he wasn't that bad! I should imagine Margaret Beaufort would have a thing or two to say about the split with Rome, and it would have been good to see that. Otherwise, nicely done, though. Keep it up, as your story telling in improving. :)
17Velocitygirl1980Awww Poor Henry, he wasn't that bad! I should imagine Margaret Beaufort would have a thing or two to say about the split with Rome, and it would have been good to see that. Otherwise, nicely done, though. Keep it up, as your story telling in improving. :)