10/21/2011 c7 80cooliochick5
Epic, dude, totally epic

10/20/2011 c6 20KKCopper
Good job BTW, KF's obidience talk is funny in an annoying "OMG How in the WORLD could u work for her even under MIND CONTROL?" kinda way =P

Robin Cardinal sibling bonding~ i like it ^-^

well it HAS to be Cardinal! SHE is the only one not mentioned in those last several paragraphs! She got hit or something ARGH Reina dont do this to me!

UPDATE

Keep writing~

~KKCopper

10/14/2011 c5 43Scotty1609
I bet Artie's REALLy excited about getting to whoop-up on KF. ^^

10/14/2011 c5 20KKCopper
it was okay but i was watching the EPISODE when I was reading this so I didn't focus too much sorry xD I still liked it though~!

*Writing Tip/Friendly Advice Time! =D*

OH one *two* thing that did botehr me was the last sentence. My pet peeve TRULY IS repetition, no matter what I say that is the BIGGY. You put,"The team got through and once the Martian was the last one through, she let the plants close back around the building" xD the whole through being in the same sentence so close to each other annoys me! I always try to use another form of the word, it really expands ur dictionary too if u do this a lot. it makes the writing smoother when they're not reading the same thing over and over.

For example, you put "Dick walked around, as Dick walked he observed the room around him, noticing more people walking around." *terrible example, just thought up something* SO insted of that You'd put, "Dick strolled forward, as he did he observed the area around him. He noticed more people moving along also."

See how that sounds better? *not saying u write like tht, not at all I hardly notice repetition but I just wanted to give u tht little pointer FFR while i was at it ^-^*

OKAY that's all from me~ xD Ivy poison is crazy

AH OKAY now for a more of a message to you not *i still have over 8,000 characters left. WHO is gonna use that many anyways? xD* SO I was watching tonights episode and through out it I squealed like a fangirl when Joker appeared on the screen and I realized how much I truly loved his character! Is that a bad thing, to be in love with the general psychoness of a villain?

OH OH OH and the WORD he made up was sooo funny! He was like, "This is unacceptable! Reprmendermitable! I don't think that last ones a word but -" *OKAY not sure what he REALLY said,, it sounded lik tht though xD and the episodes too new for any YJ nerds to have posted quotes on it yet so... we'll find out what it is later!*

YAY YOU! Tht episode made me want to go reread the one with me in it cause of Dr. Fate *WHO ALMOST KEPT KALDUR FOR GOOD!*

Keep writing~

~KKCopper

10/12/2011 c3 KKCopper
ALAS! YAY! i DO love tht word~~ hehe

^-^ AWESUM chappie! Srry I couldnt R+R sooner, its a terrible thing called school xD I can use my Nook and get Wifi in only two classes, which are one right after the other so xD

I loved the fight scene between the Clown Prince and Harley~ They are my FAV villains! (OKAY JUST the Joker, not Harls xD but she's still on my list, just my fav FEMALE deranged villain xD *Ra's is my second fav villain and then Darkseid~ =P*)

Good job! LOVED it! CAN NOT wait for Batman Beyond story UPDATE! *PLEASE do tht soon!*

Keep writing~

~KKCopper

10/4/2011 c2 20KKCopper
NICE I love Dance Dance Revolution, but, alas, I suck at it xD

GO TWINS! lol and not the ball team~ Gotta love Wally's valiant efforts, though =P ^-^

Only TWO spots I really had trouble reading cause I couldn't figure out what word was missing or put wrong, first one *both in the last secion, BTW* was here "since they gave him an every hundred to pay for the time."

? I understand he let them cause of how much they paid, but this doesnt make sense to me xD

Second time was here "Harley was her two pet hyenas with her" Did u mean "had" insted of "was"?

STILL I loved it ~ Not trying to be harsh, just trying to help!

OH and chapter one rocked too~ LOL I LOVED the way they sweet talked Bruce with the food and stuffs ^-^ Good job Reiena!

Keep writing~

~KKCopper